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Exotic Beauty Lively

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I guess this one is OK... could be better...

Originally the idea came to me based on a character in a Tanith Lee fantasy novel... I wanted to do it more Anime looking... but, the more I hard to work it and fix it, the drawing fought me, and Lively (my character) put herself in there instead!

I don't know how that happened...

I think the eyes are weird, and I want to fix them...
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maybe add more distinctive eyelashes, the nose a little less bold (specifically between the eyes), and the lips a little less stretched (the smile seems almost too wide to me, but maybe its just cause of the hair infront of her face)
Maybe a stray strand of hair going into the face to soften it a little.
Is all of her hair in the braids, or is some of it going down her back?
the hoop earings look like they're attached too high on the ear too, like they'd attached to the inside of her ear rather than the lobe.
the body looks great, though she looks like she should have some sort of little anklet or somethin, to balance the one on her arm. but then, I'm a sucker for dangly sparkly things on scanty-clad character drawings, especially my own. makes them seem more covered up, without actually being covered up. I guess..
Pretty!