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Chocolate Metal Shavings is loosely based on Anthony Burgess’s “A Clockwork Orange.” The title is based on the central character, Alexis Bleu, who is sweet on the outside and deadly vicious on the inside.

Alexis loves pain like few other people. She loves delivering pain to others and she loves receiving pain. But not everyone she encounters feels the same way. Decked out in cleated, thigh-high boots, parochial school plaid skirt, leather bustier and laughing/crying drama mask earrings, Alexis and her gang, The Goth Golema Girls go on an all-night crime spree after they are discharged from the hospital having recovered from their last gang encounter.

In one night of violence, Alexis and the girls attack and rob a security guard, take vengeance on the Khmer Rouge Girls-the gang that put them in the hospital, savagely beat their parole officer and end the night with a daring daylight robbery of a high-end cosmetics shop. As a result of the robbery, Alexis falls in love with her victim and makes an enemy out her fellow gang member.

Here are links to the chapters:

Chapter 1 – Introduction: [link]

Chapter 2 – Hellions in Gangsta Land: [link]

Chapter 3 – Officer Brobinsky Gets Her Comeuppance: [link]

Chapter 4 – Beauty and the Breasts: [link]

Chapter 5 – Tender Loving Care the Nurse Alexis Way: [link]

Chapter 6 – Dahlia has her Day: [link]

Chapter 7 – A Jury of My Peeps: [link]

Chapter 8 – Fond Remembrances of State Pen: [link]

Chapter 9 – Warden Virmenklapper has a Proposition: [link]

Chapter 10 – Visitors From the Institution: [link]

Chapter 11 – An Afternoon Matinee in Restraints: [link]

Chapter 12 – The Evil Dr. Kim: [link]

Chapter 13 – Good News From Dotty: [link]

Chapter 14A – Party Preparations: [link]

Chapter 14B – Emotions Flare: [link]

Chapter 14C – Alexis Meets Her Maker: [link]

Chapter 15 – Conclusion: [link]
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GoneToEarth24's avatar
I started reading this on Lily's website, without seeing your comment above, and it instantly reminded me of 'A Clockwork Orange'. Well done!