First on PTS

I really like the sketchy lines in this, it adds a great effect to the picture. I also love the way you coloured the hair, the way it isn't just one or two colours, that it's a blend of many shades and tints like real hair

There are a couple things to consider:

-I think you should have the hair and the background sort of blurred, so it doesn't make it look like the character was just pasted on the the background, more so that they compliment eachother. Also, it would reduce the jagged look some parts of the hair has.

-Her brown eye's iris and pupil don't seem to line up, the iris should be moved left more so that the pupil is in the centre of the iris. I don't think that this would be an easy fix, but I do encourage it.

-her head on the right side of the pic seems tall, you should, i guess, colour over it using the background colour.

-and finally you should shadow her face a bit more, mainly her forehead area and the neck area.

Sorry for all the constructive critacism T-T hopefully I didn't seem too bitchy..