lil crayon freak

I definitely like this design and will want to have it on my t-shirt. I would kinda appreciate some feedback on it, though as I got a little confused with the colour (as you can tell). While I was safely aiming for the strong black'n'red combination my wife ruined it for me by saying she doesn't like it. So I messed about with it (middle). Still 6 colours. Thanks for any feedback that might arrive.