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Description
Sunrise at Réou d'Arsine.
Ecrins National Park, French Alps.
Ecrins National Park, French Alps.
Image size
1000x666px 224.98 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed
1/2 second
Aperture
F/16.0
Focal Length
10 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jul 25, 2010 6:18:25 AM +02:00
Sensor Size
6mm
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Comments19
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Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Majestic and dramatic scene with thousands of compositions awaits being captured.
This is a very nice place for photography but there's a couple things her that's gone wrong to get the shot as good as it could've been.
Light
Setting the light as you've done here sometimes works ver well but when you do it you gotta make sure you have a foreground that's not as dense as you got i here. Feels like the shot is a bit underexposed through the foreground.
Composition
Pool of water, nice mountains, green grass and a clear sky.
To use more of the sky here is a no-no, that wouldn't add anything. But to play around more with the foreground and how you have the lines here I think have room for improvement. For example, this shot needs more space outside the pool of water on each sides. The structure of the small river is all distorted and to crop it this close only projects the distorted look it has out on the composition. It needs more room basically.
Conclusion
This is a nice photo with massive potential. The landscape here just screams for being captured. If you have the chance, next you visit, try get some more lines in the shot that can lead the eye and to balance up the composition a bit more than you have now. It'll all set up a nicer photo. Also a wider shot or a vertical shot with more foreground would also work.
Keep workin!
/Rob