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along the fence

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photo © P. Micciche :iconpmiccich:

i would proffer that you would ask me before painting or drawing this :)
Image size
4000x3000px 6.52 MB
Make
EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Model
KODAK EASYSHARE M530 Digital Camera
Shutter Speed
1/202 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Sep 18, 2010, 1:07:32 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Beautiful picture! I love the perspective!! I like the contrast between the greens and the blues. It really makes it crisp and clean.

As for critique: as much as I love the scene and want to visit it one day, there are a couple things you could improve or maybe take a look at. The clouds and the background in the upper left look almost painted compared the crispness of the grass and fence. I like the painted feel really but for that I'd have like to have seen less of a DoF and a little more blur highlighting the fence itself and less of the grass getting toward the right hand side corners. In that same line of thought, doing so I believe, would give your photo more focus and more direction in what you want to convey and/or portray as the focus of this piece. Also one tiny detail but maybe if the horizon was horizontal it would also draw more focus to the fence's perspective. I like your composition and how it follows the rule of thirds <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> Well done~
Overall very nice piece! I love the perspective~