literature

NaruHina-Trust Chapter 11

Deviation Actions

NelNel-Chan's avatar
By
Published:
3.5K Views

Literature Text

The day came, and Hinata was wearing a dark blue dress with zippers across her shoulders, and waist, waiting for Sakura.

Nia was in her bag. She asked the owner if it was ok to bring her, as long as she didn't do anything to the costumers or the fish, which was ok Nia loved people and she knows the rules.

“Sorry we're late.” a voice called out.

Hinata turned around, and was frozen in terror, as she noticed Sakura and two other people standing by her side.

Sasuke, who had been a kind friend to her and enjoyed having him around. He was wearing a blue t-shirt, with black and jeans with keys dangling from it.

Sakura was wearing a gray and pink stripped skirt, with a pink blouse for the top, along with a cherry blossom in her hair.

The other was a boy with three whiskers on each side of cheeks, and had blond spiked hair. He was wearing a orange jacket with black pants, along with a black cap to go with it.   

Hinata loved his clothes but grabbed Sakura's hand and took off.

“Hinata?” Sakura asked as she was being pulled by Sakura. Then, they came to a stopping point near a bench.

“Why didn't you tell me about bringing Sasuke-kun, and Naruto-kun? I thought it was just the two of us?”

“No, I had four tickets so I invited them with us as well. Why did you think that?” Sakura asked.

“Ano...” Hinata didn't finish her sentence like before. Sakura smiled and grabbed Hinata's hand and walk back to Naruto and Sasuke.

“You'll be fine, Hinata.” She said with a gentle sound in her voice.
Hinata was happy but she wanted to ran away. She couldn't stand being with Naruto right now, especially what she was wearing.
“Sakura-san...? I can't.”  

Sakura stopped and glanced at Hinata.

“What?”

“I-I not dressed right.” Sakura then her outfit.

“There's nothing wrong with it Hinata, you look fine. Come on.” Sakura started to drag her this time. Nia jumped out of the bag and on to Hinata's hat, so Hinata can hide her face.

“Sorry about that, you guys!” Sakura yelled at the boys. Naruto and Sasuke were still waiting. “We had to talk for a second.”

“That's ok.” Naruto said.

Sasuke went up to Hinata and whispered “You look beautiful today.” and past her while saying “Let's go!”

Hinata looked up at Sasuke and smiled that he was here.

Sakura and Naruto ran up to Sasuke, excited to get in the aquarium. Hinata watched the three people gone into the aquarium, and smiled that all of them had a bond, a beautiful bond that could not be broken that she loved to see.

She also shares with her own friends, Shino, Kurenai, and Kiba, along with everyone else that she has ever  met in her life, good or bad.

She wanted to step back, for she was still didn't to face Naruto.  He didn't seem to notice her this time.

Sakura came back, yelling “Hey Hinata! Come along! You not leaving us alone by ourselves!” Nia pushed Hinata onward to aquarium.

Hinata didn't see Naruto in sight. So She followed them, as Naruto didn't talk to her, which it was fine.

They reach to the elevator. Sakura, Sasuke, and Naruto headed in as Hinata was running, trying to reach the door, as it was closing.

She made it just in time, but as she stepped inside a sound went off indicating that it was over the weight limit.

Everyone stared at Hinata, embarrassing her greatly.

“Oh no! How embarrassing!” she thought, and ran out the elevator, wanting to leave.

“Wait, Hinata!” a voice called out to her, and grabbed her wraist.

Hinata looked back, noticing a boy that she didn't want to see... Naruto.


She tugged forward trying to tell Naruto to let go, but he held on even tighter.

“P-Please let go, Naruto-kun. I'll just go home.”

Naruto still wouldn't let go, instead shouted at her “Why are you running away? I knew you've been avoiding me for awhile now....I don't understand...Hinata...” Naruto looked sad as he sounded serious.

“I won't let you go till you tell me the truth...Hinata.”

Hinata blushed, as she closed her eyes and didn't say a word. Nia, who was her bag, looked at her with sadness.

Naruto still didn't let go of her hand, but made a sly smile as he told her “Besides... We can fit one more person in here.” He then, pulled Hinata closer, bringing her in the elevator, while taking her other hand, and standing on one leg telling her to do the same.

The elevator shut, and started to go up.

Hinata blushed, as he didn't let go of her hand.
“My...My...”
Naruto blushed too, forgetting his words about not letting her go.
“Crap! I forgot to let go.”

The warm touch between them showed something. A bond that could not be broken as well. Like a blood oath. For this, many might have thought of it as something more.

Hinata looked up and Naruto, who was looking in another direction. She closed her eyes as she thought “Hurry...” as her heart was beating,

BADUM
“Hurry up...”
BADUM
“And get there...”
BADUM
“..,To the third floor!”
BADUM

PING
The elevator opened the door.

Hinata and Naruto were pushed out by the crowd of people.

“No, wait!” They both shouted, as the elevator was closing for it was not the third floor.

It was too late.

“It's gone...” Hinata said sadly.


Then they looked at each other, and turn back in another direction.

“It's just the two of us.”
:iconbrainfartsplz::icondotdotdotzplz: Sorry guys... I'm been watching this wheather, and my Nature vs. Technology presentation, that I just sucked at doing today. I hate speech! But in case I mess up, I always make a video on that topic, but sadly class ended before the video was over. :icononichewplz: It like... torture.
“Man I gotta write a better description on their outfits, which I suck entirely. If you noticed Hinata's outfit was made from Mk when he first created Hinata and was also wearing it in Naruto Shippuden 2nd ending, or Aka Konoha High when she went on that date with Naruto and everyone was stalking her, even Sasuke! Then the side of bench broke and Hinata feel on Naruto, which they noticed everybody watching them and then ran away, not telling him her feelings.:iconsighingplz: :iconpunch1plz::iconpunch2plz: If though she didn't (And I knew that was going to happen) I was glad they showed that.:iconomgsocuteplz: Btw You know that picture with her falling on Naruto? I seriously thought it was fake, That it was fanart. But i was so shocked that it actually happen.:iconshockplz: Anyway This was a least bit better than ch 10, seem like everyone loved ch 8. I'm glad you liked it. I will draw their outfits so you'll know what they look like but for now... just picture it using ur imagination.

I was just watching another Miyazaki film and it got me all like this :iconloveloveplz: it a very popular flim for girl that he's made. “Whisper of the Heart” Another awesome movie, then i watch “The Cat Returns” shorta like a squeal to Whisper of the heart. Now I'm bout to watch Lupin the 3rd, Castle of Cagliostro, which I Lmao at. I haven't seen that show in a long time but loved the movie, by miyzaki. :iconhurrrplz:

Well Thanks for reading, viewing, downloading, favorite, or comment. Hope you can't wait for more.

Nia belongs to me.
Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto.

Oh great job for finding out what happen in this ch to chiiisprincess-chan! :iconcheerplz:

Ch22 pt 2
[link]
Ch22 pt 1
[link]
ch21
[link]
ch 20
[link]
ch 19 pt 2
[link]
ch19 pt 1
[link]
ch18 bonus Story of Mamo and Hinata
[link]
ch18
[link]
ch17
[link]
ch 16
[link]
ch 15
[link]
ch 14
[link]
ch 13
[link]
ch 12
[link]
ch 11
[link]
ch 10
[link]
ch 9
[link]
ch 8
[link]
ch 7 pt 2
[link]
ch 7 pt 1
[link]
ch 6 pt 2
[link]
ch 6 pt 1
[link]
ch 5
[link]
ch 4
[link]
ch 3
[link]
ch 2
[link]
ch 1
[link]
© 2010 - 2024 NelNel-Chan
Comments17
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Skywardstrike1998's avatar
hum...ok then alone, just the two...talk about luck...