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snowbones

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April 3, 2011
The suggester writes: snowbones by =wish-sticks is incredibly well-written and intense, feeding the reader images that are both horrific and hopeful. The entire poem is a brilliant metaphor for life in general. (Suggested by =bowie-loon123 on behalf of *Dailylitdeviations)
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holding my hands over the kettle
the skin on my fingertips peels back,
like dated wallpaper,
like flowers blooming.

they're burning from the inside out,
nails turning to varnish, turning to steam,
bones click-clacking their way out;
spreading like wildfire.

the whistling stops, and
blink
and my fingers are just fingers,
ink stained, bitten nails.

sunlight streams across the kitchen,
my fingers warm and
slightly damp, i trace patterns on
steamed-up windows.
My example entry for #prompt-o-matic's prompt this week:

STEAM.

Go check it out!


OHMYGODWHAT

THANK YOU EVERYONE WHO HAS OR IS ABOUT TO FAVE THIS
I CAN'T EVEN HOW HAPPY I AM RIGHT NOW.
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Amazing! Such a well deserved daily deviation. 

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