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Very on time.
This chapter should help clear up a few things for some people.
This chapter was easy to write once I got chapter 9 out of the way. That was a hard chapter for me just because it was a turning point in the story.
But once I had made a few decisions it was easy enough after that.
So....Comments? Mistakes?
Oh, just remembered something. A few chapters back I had stated that the game was suppose to start at 10am. But then I realized that I was making the whole thing take place at night. So I went back and changed it to 6pm so that the sun would be set by then.
DISCLAIMER
I do know of a place called Dutch Boy Burgers, but I haven't a clue if it's part of a chain or what their prices are. So if you do see one, where ever you are, don't expect the two burgers, a drink each and fries for $20.
I'm not saying they don't have such a thing, I'm just saying I don't know.
This chapter should help clear up a few things for some people.
This chapter was easy to write once I got chapter 9 out of the way. That was a hard chapter for me just because it was a turning point in the story.
But once I had made a few decisions it was easy enough after that.
So....Comments? Mistakes?
Oh, just remembered something. A few chapters back I had stated that the game was suppose to start at 10am. But then I realized that I was making the whole thing take place at night. So I went back and changed it to 6pm so that the sun would be set by then.
DISCLAIMER
I do know of a place called Dutch Boy Burgers, but I haven't a clue if it's part of a chain or what their prices are. So if you do see one, where ever you are, don't expect the two burgers, a drink each and fries for $20.
I'm not saying they don't have such a thing, I'm just saying I don't know.
The Gift - Chapter ElevenI slowly turned around and saw my dad's green Accord with my parents sitting in the front seats. My mom got out of the car while my dad tried to call her back but failed. I saw him park the car as she came closer to us.
"Who are you?" she asked Matthew. She sounded like she was assessing some kind of threat instead of just talking to a boy.
"I'm Matthew Cole, Ms. Marshall," he calmly told her as I stood in front of him.
"The boy that punched you?" she now asked me with wide eyes.
"He punched you?" my dad asked as he came closer.
"It was a long time ago and it was an accident," I told both of them.
"What were you doing?" she asked me before she turned on Matthew again. "What were you doing to my son?"
"Mom, nothing is wrong," I told her before I turned to my dad who was just standing back looking at what was going on. "Really, everything is great," I tried to tell them with a weak smile on my face. I then swallowed as I realized that it was time to tell them.
"We're dating. He's the one
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XD oh gosh the mom XD