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I revised and added a few little things, hopefully it makes it better:D

Hello's! Here it is the first part of the quick fic. I probably edited to death and it still isn't "great" in my eyes but a lot of you have been patient on my teasing comments of it coming:) I really hope you like it. My goal was to convey emotion and I hope I did so.
If you don't like the pairing ...well don't read it this is a free country.:P

I don't own any of the characters, Capcom does. The story is completely fictional and from my own head. This story is to Silverwarden who has been patient with me.:) If I missed any credit it was not intentional. There is mild violence for those that don't like it:P I welcome constructive criticism, since I do have more parts but thought I would try the first chapter. Anyways thanks for reading it, hope you enjoy!

Part one of fan fic [link]
If you like here is part 2 [link]
part 3 [link]
part 4 [link]
part 5 [link]
Next set is
C & C part 1 [link]
Part 2 [link]
Part 3 [link]
Part 4 [link]
Part 5...Claire’s perspective [link]
Part 5 Leon’s perspective of one above [link]
Leon’s should be read after Claire’s since the rest of the story is on Claire’s:D
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While this is writen very nicely, I can't help but feel a little lost. Now I haven't read the rest of the story so I can't say in all certainty, but this seems a little random. This would be better if you explained how the characters got into the current situation; background info is always a must in multi-chapter stories. Though like I said, I haven't read everything yet, so you could be starting things off with present events and then moving your way back. That's understandable, and please correct me if this is the truth.

Either way, you have a lot of talent in writing out emotional scenes, and I encourage you to keep it up! :pat: