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Pokeumans Jack's Ordeal Ch.1

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Hi, my name's Jack, I'm a 6 and a half year old kid in grade 3... Or at least I was...

I'd better start from the beginning. It was a little while after dinner that my back started to feel a bit itchy. However, I forgot about it almost insanely when my 14 year old sister, Amanda asked if I wanted to play some Pokémon with her.

So we went to go play Pokémon and before I knew it, it was dark out and our mom came in and told me and my sister to go to bed. I didn't want to and I'm guessing that Amanda noticed, seeing as she said "Jack if you go to bed now, I promise to play some more Pokemon first thing in the morning since its Saturday. Deal?"

I agreed so I changed into my Pajamas's and went to bed, scratching my itchy back.

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The next morning I was shocked awake by my sister screaming. I looked at my sister's face and was shocked even more. Her cheeks had turned red, and her nose was gone, replaced by a small black triangle thing. "Sis, your face!" I said.

She ran over to the mirror at the other end of the room, while I looked down at myself only to receive an even bigger shock. My body was covered in strange purple and whitish fur. I also noticed that my pajamas seemed to have gotten slightly bigger.

Then mom slammed open the door and yelled "WHAT'S WRONG? Why did you ji-" Her eyes then went weird and she said "YOU'RE ONE OF THEM!".

She pulled out some metal can and sprayed some purple stuff at me and Amanda, then everything went black

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The next thing I remember is hearing Amanda's voice calling out to me "Jack, are you there?"

So I called back "sis?" I tried to get up only to realize that I was chained to the floor. I looked around to find that we seemed to be in some dark vibrating metal room. Looking down at myself I saw that my pajamas were sagging even than before.

Right about then the room jerked violently and my hands were yanked out of my chains sending me flying to the other end of the room. Realizing that I was free I went over to where my sister was still chained up and asked "You all right sis?"

But before she could respond the side of the room started glowing red and melted, making a big hole. and then I saw what had made the hole, an Arcanine. A real life Pokemon! It popped its head in and said "are you guys all right?"

So I responded "yea we seem to be alright"

The Arcanine came in and told Amanda "Don't move" and snapped the chains binding her with its teeth.

We walked through the hole outside and saw that we were outside and that we had been inside a truck. That's when it hit me. The purple and whitish fur growing all over me, my sister's face, the fact that I seemed to be shrinking, this real life Arcanine standing with us. Me and my sister were turning into Pokemon!

It was just after I realized this that the Arcanine went and said something that I missed and snapped me out of my thoughts. He turned towards me and my sister and said "Listen, I don't have time to explain everything to you two right now but I need you to trust me. You're all in a lot of danger right now so I need to get you two of here right now. Get on my back! NOW!"

So me and my sister climbed up on the Arcanine's back and he said "Good now hold on tight, and don't let go under ANY CIRCUMSTANCES. Not unless I tell you to!"

So I replied "Oky dokey Mr. Arcanine".

The Arcanine then responded "Its Jasper kid. Not Mr. Arcanine." and yelled out "AGILITY!" right before he started running rely fast into a forest!

It was really windy. Trees zoomed by at incredible speed.

Amanda then suddenly screamed "AAACK WERE GOING TO CRASH!". Right before her body sparked with electricity, shocking me and making my body go numb. I think Jasper felt it to as he suddenly jumped really high.

A branch thin hit me in the face, causing me to lose my grip and fall of. I screamed as Jasper and Amanda slowly disappeared into the distance. Right before everything went black...

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I woke up all alone. The grass around me looked really big and I realized that I wasn't wearing any clothes. Fur was now covering my entire body and my hands looked, well, weird. I looked around and noticed that I was in some sort of weird wrinkly looking dome like thing.

I called out "Hello? Anyone there?" But there was no response.

So I tried getting up only to fall over and see to my shock that I had a long purple tail that was slightly curved at the end. That's when it hit me, I had seen that tail before, and it was just like that of a Rattata! I had turned into a Rattata!

I realized that if I was a Rattata then that meant that the grass wasn't rely that big, I WAS REALLY SMALL! And that would also mean that this weird dome thing was really my clothes!

I tried getting up again only this time on all fours, it felt weird and just a little awkward but at the same time right. I then looked at my clothes looking for an exit and found the sleeve of my pajama shirt. So I decided to crawl through. It was a bit of a tight fit but I managed to crawl through to come outside into the forest.

I saw that it was sunset and thought of my sister. Amanda! I then remembered what had happened with Jasper and being knocked off his back by that branch!

So I called out as loudly as I could "Amanda! Amanda, WHERE ARE YOU!?" I heard nothing but a small breeze in response.

I then noticed some sunlight being reflected off a small puddle of water. So I walked over to it and looked in. I had grown whiskers covered in whitish colored fur and I could see that my two front teeth had become huge. My eyes had changed shape and turned red. My ears had grown huge and were shaped like rodent's with purple fur around the edges.

It was true I had turned into a Rattata! I needed to find my sister, however just as I thought that a big shadowy figure appeared behind me in the puddle's reflection. I quickly turned around only to come face to face with the biggest cat I had ever seen. It looked at me and licked its lips and could intently tell what it was thinking.

Lunch!
Aug, 2012 edit: did some minor editing tweaks here and there in the story, nothing really major, so if you've already read this you probably won't notice that much of a difference, if you haven't it will probably read a bit better now

It's here Ch.1 of my 2ed Pokéumans story revolving around Jack from my first one!

I think this turned out prity good considering, I'd apercate it if you guy's told me what you think, anything I could in prove on, ext.

If your new to my story's also check out my ouder story Pokeumans Sparkler [link] as that story and this one are interlinking

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pokediginut's avatar
Damn, a weak ass Rattata and your sister messed up, thats rough!