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MLP: Drama queen

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Based in the episode 3 of the season 2.
I hope you like it ^^

Critiques please.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

So this is my first critique. I am going to try to make this as fair as possible so please bare with me. First off I would like to say that the shading is excellent. Shading is really hard to do and you pulled that off really well, making this piece stand out and seem more life like. You were also able to pull off Rarity's curls well and I am impressed with that. Now the hoof above her body is a little bit too thin, it should be slightly wider. Rarity's back legs are too short and should be longer because her legs look like the size of a filly's legs. Also her flank is blank. I think you could have fit a tad bit of her cutie mark there. Otherwise, great piece! I think you did a really good job.