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The Crimson Rune Chapter One

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Chapter One
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

It is good. Of course I a not familiar with the panels and things, so that bothered me, yet it is what this is all about. I am guessing it is like a comic or something, so I understand the panels and such. Therefore I understand why the format is that way.

Now, for the critique. I am not familiar with the format, and for one who has no idea, I totally understood your story, and I have no editing comments that I could see, and I know you have the skill within you to make it happen, now we need to find pictures for it. Of course my over active imagination was picturing the scenes in my head which of course impacted me once again.

I did not realize Crimson was a character thought it was an explosive until I read (his?) the side effects of what was taking place.

Yes!! I totally get it.