Somewhere in my dreams

This would be an overall fairly strong piece, but the one thing that kind of throws off the impact is the clashing of flow.

The wind in the water, the tree, and the clouds give it a very horizontal appeal, including the chosen orientation. Art is like music, there has to be something that carries you through, but because of the bold verticals of the chains in the watches, I'm sort of dropping down, then stopping and start over again with the horizontal direction of the lower hemisphere, like my mind is overwhelmed. My suggestion would be to perhaps make the chains thinner and less detailed so that they would fade back into space. Detail on small objects at distances never usually does art justice.