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for unseeing eyes

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November 8, 2012
The suggester says "Truly, I can feel the weight of the world in these words. All of it. Every ounce of pressure that composed each and every line, pressed them into words, I can feel it weighing on my shoulders." for unseeing eyes is by *Pailei
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laden with sky
we stumbled
and painted mockingbirds
on loveless branches
folding in our slender limbs
and ducking under our own
voices, fidgety and frail
against the wall of night.

between the dipping blades
and drawn shoulders
we learned to craft our words
steady-soft,
a drumming rain
that carved canyons
in open hearts and
drew the sunshine to
our supping lips.

keen-eyed, we watched
remembering the weight
of unseeing eyes
and scalding remarks
and we learned to slip
the noose-knots and slide
through the soul-cracks
and somehow
build kingdoms under
upturned noses.

with lyrical uncertainty
and tender determination
we built a pyre of peace
in the shadows
of dissonance
and watched it blaze
the truth across our
pliant hearts.

as solemn
as new leaves still curled
and stretching hands
unfurled in suppliance
we lifted our heads
in broken laughter,
for this light is our burden,
and even a whisper
can shatter silence
and bring the blind
to sight.
One candle against the dark, one breath breaks the silence.

Did you know everyone is a rebel at heart?

***Edit***
A DD?!?! I am honored--and beyond thrilled!
Thank you so much to everyone who takes the time to read my work, and rest assured I will respond to each of your comments and faves (though it might take some time). :heart: :love: :heart:
© 2011 - 2024 Pailei
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This is phenomenal!