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Doctor Who: One and a Half Doctors part 2

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INT. TARDIS - DAY
                                                            
The Tardis shakes violently. THE DOCTOR struggles to his
feet, AMY and RORY hold onto each other and the railing. THE
DOCTOR tries to hit as many nobs as he can reach.
                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
      (To Rory)
Twist and push the Protration
handles!

                                                            
Rory twists something, but nothing happens.
                                                            
                       AMY
Try the blue stabalizers!

                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
Those don't really work.

                                                            
                       AMY
      (pushing the blue
       stabilizers)
There.

                                                            
Shaking becomes less and less violent, THE DOCTOR, AMY and
RORY stare around the interior of the Tardis, which is full
of cracks and some wires and tubes hang from the ceiling.
Some dripping opaque liquid, and one "window" has popped
out.
                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
      (standing up
       brushign himslef
       off)
Well, that wasn't as bad as I had
feared

                                                            
                       RORY
That felt pretty bad.

                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
You would have rather become a
black hole would you? No? I
thought not, so this was a pretty
good landing.

                                                            
                       RORY
Thanks to my lovely wife

                                                            
THE DOCTOR puts his ear to the consol.
                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
      (to the TARDIS)
Whats wrong darling?

                                                            
AMY and RORY try not to laugh. Rory brushes off some dust
from AMY's jacket. AMY brushes RORY's hand away.
                                                            
THE DOCTOR pulls out the sonic screwdriver and scans the
Tardis
                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
Oh dear, she's in a state, this is
going to take some time to fix.
Time and me being extremely
clever, good thing I always am.

                                                            
                       AMY
      (walking up behind
       the doctor)
Anything we can do to help?

                                                            
THE DOCTOR spins around so fast it startles AMY and RORY.
                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
Actually yes, I need wheat
grass juice, about 3 gallons
should do it.

                                                            
                       RORY
Wheat grass juice? You mean that
disgusting green stuff people say
is good for you?

                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
That's the stuff! It doesn't do
anything special for you humans,
just another form of pureed
vitamins but it will help the
Tardis heal faster.

                                                            
                       AMY
And where are we supposed to get
that, Doctor?

                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
Well, before it shorted out, the
sanner showed that we landed in
the 21st century, so find a juice
bar and buy some juice.

                                                            
AMY and RORY start towards the doors. AMY turns around.
                                                            
                       AMY
Doctor, we have no money.

                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
Oh yes, I forgot.

                                                            
THE DOCTOR rushes through a side passageway. Returns with a
handful of crumpled bills.
                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
That should be plenty.

                                                            
                       AMY
      (looking at the
       money)
Where did you get this?

                                                            
                       DOCTOR 11
From a coat pocket, been there for
years, I dont use money, now
you're wasting time! GO!

                                                            
THE DOCTOR ushers them to the doors. AMY and RORY walk out,
carfully closing the doors behind them.The Tardis is in a
nearly empty parking lot. AMY and RORY start to walk.

Change camera view on them to is as if it were on the Tardis
door. In the sky are zeplins, 5 are in full view but there
are more in the distance.
                                                            
                                         FADE OUT

                                                            
AMY and RORY walk the side walk, the parking lot behind
them. more than half the people walking by wear earpeices in
both ears
                                                            
                       RORY
      (looking up)
I dont remember the 21st century
having so many zeplins.

                                                            
                       AMY
Maybe we're in the later 21st
century, maybe we're in the 22nd
century, the Doctors been off
before, just act like well, like
it is normal.

                                                            
They walk by a newstand.
                                                            
CU on news headline "President Harriot Jones leads the UN to get New Cyber Act passed"
                                                            
AMY stops to look at a large poster on a wall advertising
"Kleatens, you're best stop for summer apparel." A picture
of a very attractive woman is sporting shorts and a colorful top.
                                                            
                       AMY
      (leaning in for a
       better look)
Fashion seems to have stayed the same.

                                                            
Woman on the poster moves, putting on sunglasses that
weren't in her hands before.
                                                            
                       POSTER WOMAN
You'll look neat in the heat! Only
at KLEATONS.

                                                            
                       AMY
      (jumping back)
YIKES!

                                                            
                       RORY
What was that about acting normal?

                                                            
                       AMY
Leave off! I nearly had a heart
attack! (pause) That poster was
pretty high tech though, we must
be in the near future

                                                            
                       RORY
Let's just hope the near future
has old fashioned juice bars.


                         FADE OUT QUICKLY
yeah, the wheat grass thing, it was the first thing to come to my mind, thought it was kinda funny. and I know nothing about summer fashion, or any fashion for that matter. I decided to end parts at a FADE OUT, not a commercial. it would only be a few parts if I did that.
again, I know there are spelling and grammar mistakes, I do not mind if you point them out. I know there are more mistakes than I am aware of.

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DutchessEmiri's avatar
ah in about the middle where amy and rory go off to find juice and notice the zeppelins, it says:
CU on news headline "President Harriet Jones leads the UN to get New Cyber Act passed"
the term for a "President" in Britain is "Prime Minister" I believe... just FYI. but amaizing scenario playing out :)