YJ- Cruel Irony

This is really a great piece. I think the ratings I've given are fair and I'd like to take this space to explain them.

Vision: By looking at this I would think you had a clear plan when starting this of how it was going to look, but it does look rather cluttered. I suggest splitting longer comic strips into smaller sections to avoid this in the future.
Originality: Although it is fanart, it's an idea that I cannot say I've encountered before.

Technique:The coloring and shading are simple and very well done (something I love about your style) but I did notice in a few places the lines were a bit sketchy, as were those of Wally's speech bubbles that were printed in orange.

Impact: I'm fairly sure <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="37" height="25" alt="" title=""/> was at least a small part of every fan's reaction to this.

I really hope this is something of what you were looking for in a critique. I know you have far more experience (not to mention talent) than I, so feel free to disregard this comletely.