Original Quotes - One's desire cannot...01

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Decided I need to get more involved..Gosh, I hope I did this right...never done it before

I would love feedback please.
And especially continuous feedback on any spelling errors (especially with apostrophes and stuff)
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On another note! I'm glad I partook in English class, poetry and writing assignments xD I have a journal full of poems I wrote, including 6 word memoirs, then I have some poems I've written on my own time along with random quotes.

Partially doing this for fun and to put out my ideas while there's a base because I had originally planned to make T-shirts with my quotes and stuff on them
So on a personal POV, this will help determine what shirts to carry on with as my own (when I get some money to do so..so talking about a year or more from now since I can't get hired where I'd like to work until 16)