Tezcatlipoca

Though I honestly wouldn't fav this piece, it is an interesting work. When I came upon it, I was close to dismissing it, but after a bit of observing and analyzing, I realized that this was quite detailed and carefully worked on.

Vision is 3. I assume you were going for the stained glass look. I like that, but there is way too much going on in the background. If you were going for the stained glass look, It could have been handled better. If you give it a second look, it looks like just a random picture.

Originality is 4. Can't say much about this. It's an original character on an original background. The pose is unoriginal however.

Technique is 3. Not enough colors, too many lines in the background, and the character doesn't stand out.

... actually, I take that back. You have an excellent use of colors, but they are just... boring. And they still blend with the main picture, who is in a boring stance.

Impact is 2. I seriously was about to pass it over.

If I did this picture, I would use more colors, I would make the background pattern more visible, and I would make the character standout more by giving him a more dynamic pose.

Its nowhere near a BAD piece, but a lot could be done to make it better.