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INT. ART FUNDAMENTALS ROOM
Minami has her head resting on her right hand, her left
lazily taking notes. Her eyes are slowly drifting into
sleep. She shakes her head violently to wake herself up,
though the dark circles under her eyes betray her.
TEACHER
Alright guys! Pack up your stuff!
Minami looks around, confused out of her mind. Her fellow
classmates are gathering their art supplies and jackets,
talking merrily amongst themselves. Minami grabs Stajianna
as she walks by Minami's desk.
MINAMI
I missed something, where is
everyone going? Class just
started... didn't it?
Stajianna straightens her floral patterned dress.
STAJIANNA
We're going to the nearby graveyard
to do some sketches remember? Mr
Fox told us yesterday that we were
going there, though he hasn't told
us why yet.
Minami eyes open up, a tad more alert now. She hastily grabs
her things, motioning for Stajianna to wait for her.
MINAMI
Erg, A.J was up most of the night
last night on the phone with her
dad, which kept me up. Soooooo
tired.
Stajianna looks impatient, watching the last student leave.
STAJIANNA
Hurry up, we're the last ones here.
Holding her sketchbook and ruler in one hand, she shoves
about 5 pencils in her pocket with the other. Grabbing her
black fedora hat and placing it on her head, she then makes
her way towards the exit.
MINAMI
OK! Let's go.
EXT. LOCAL TORONTO GRAVEYARD
Mr. Fox, stands in the graveyard, lecturing his eleven
students.
MR FOX
Alright guys! We have about 2 hours
before we need to head back to
school. I want all of you to draw
at least 5 different and unique
tombstones.
Stajianna raises her hand, while Minami looks around
excitedly.
MR FOX
Yes Staj?
Mr. Fox turns his gaze towards his student.
STAJIANNA
What are we drawing them for?
Mr Fox claps his hands together and then points excitedly at
Stajianna.
MR FOX
Great question Stajianna! Halloween
is coming up soon, so I want you
guys to do a short comic using
these gravestones as a reference.
He walks around the tombstones as he talks.
MR FOX
I want you to use the knowledge of
your past assignments for this one.
Work on your drapery, posing and
positive and negative spacing to
create good flow.
He dry washes his hands as he looks around at his students.
MR FOX
OK, any more questions? No? OK!
Happy drawing!
EXT. LOCAL TORONTO GRAVEYARD
Stajianna and Minami both sit with her legs crossed on the
grass. Pages of tombstone sketches are laid out in front of
Minami, while Stajianna has them neatly in a pile. Minami
however, is now working on a picture of two werewolves
instead of drawing more tombstone drawings. She holds onto
her right leg as she sketches. A group of her classmates sit
not far away from the two friends, talking to each other as
they draw a tombstone in the shape of an angel. Stajianna
glances towards Minami and sees her work.
STAJIANNA
Are those for that Halloween
contest?
MINAMI
Yup. These gravestone references
are going to go perfect with it
too.
Minami makes a thinking face.
MINAMI
A.J said once she finds her song
book, she's like 98.7% done with
her part.
STAJIANNA
Wow, that's specific.
Minami makes grins stupidly.
MINAMI
Well, I might be paraphrasing a
bit.
Minami leans in towards Stajianna, speaking in almost a
whisper as to not be heard by her nearby classmates. As she
leans in, she grabs her right leg tightly, and quickly hides
the pain in her face. This action goes unnoticed to
Stajianna.
MINAMI
Can you keep a secret?
STAJIANNA
Sure. I promise I wont tell anyone.
MINAMI
Ooo! You better make sure you can
keep that, because, if you don't,
you will get banned from the
planet!
Baffled, Stajianna replied.
STAJIANNA
What? Banned from the planet?
Minami shakes it off.
MINAMI
Never mind.
MINAMI
Anyway, A.J is having a really hard
time right now. So I decided, if we
win this contest, I'm going to give
her my half of the prize money.
Stajianna smiles sweetly at her friends nice gesture.
STAJIANNA
That's nice of you.
MINAMI
Well, she needs it more than I do
at the moment.
MINAMI
I'm just glad Mr Fox gave us this
assignment, because I'm going to
kill two birds with one pencil.
Minami looks at Stajianna, who gives her an odd look. Minami
answers, arms moving in an odd motion. *Description for Ryuu
here*
MINAMI
You know, cause we're artists and
we use pencils instead of rocks or
stones or whatever the saying is
and... Never mind.
Both girls begin to laugh, each enjoying the moment.
EXT. COLLEGE COURT YARD
Under the oddly shaped tree, sitting on the edge of the
fountain, Minami and A.J sit together working on their
Halloween project.
MINAMI
I'm glad you found your song book.
Too bad it was in the trash though.
A.J tries to rub off a stain on the corner of her book.
A.J
Yeah, too bad ketchup don' wanna
come off easily though.
A.J
So what do ya got?
Minami looks at A.J's lyrics while A.J looks at Minami's
drawings.
MINAMI
'Adorned blackness'? I see what you
did there.
A.J
Yup. Symbolism always works well
with the big wigs.
A.J leans forward, pointing at Minami's sketches, showing
her what she is talking about.
A.J
Ah also like how ya captured the
emotion on their faces. Ya can
really tell what's goin' on, even
though they don' talk.
Minami fist bumps A.J with a wide smile on her face.
MINAMI
We got this.
A.J
Time ta enter our final product?
MINAMI
Naturally.
A.J has a sudden wave of doubtfulness.
A.J
Think it's Halloween-ish enough?
Minami get's her papers together and looks reassuringly at
A.J.
MINAMI
I think the fact that it's a unique
fantasy story set on Halloween is
good enough.
Confidence returning, A.J replies.
A.J
Yeah. Yer right. Let's go enter
this project!
EXT. TORONTO HAUNTED MANSION
It's Halloween night and there are an abundance of
trick-or-treaters walking around. A shot of the Haunted
mansion.
INT. TORONTO HAUNTED MANSION DANCE HALL
Minami is dressed as a traditional Japanese priestess, while
A.J wears her normal everyday wear. Minami looks to be in
pain while A.J looks amusingly around the crowd. The room is
filled with party-goers, all dress up in various costumes.
The room is heavily decorated, with spiderwebs and coffins
and blood spattered walls.
A.J
Man, Ah'm kind of nervous. Ah hope
we win.
A.J notices Minami bending over, holding her right leg.
A.J
You OK Mina? Yer not havin' an
attack are ya? Need ta lie down?
MINAMI
No worries, I'm fine. Though I do
need to sit for a bit. Come on,
let's find a seat.
A.J
What's a matter hun?
Minami bites her knuckles as they take a seat on a nearby
bench.
MINAMI
Nothing. Nothing major. It will
pass.
Concerned her friend isn't well again, A.J grabs Minami's
hand to reassure her everything is OK.
A.J
Are ya sure?
Minami looks down at A.J's hand. A.J noticed what she had
done and quickly retrieves it.
MINAMI
You should go have fun. I just need
to wait until the pain passes. It
comes in waves.
A.J
Pain? What pain? Why are ya in
pain?
It's now Minami's turn to shy away, biting her lip and
looking to the ground. She replies, keeping her gaze on the
floor.
MINAMI
Remember that earthquake I told you
about? Well, I got more than a scar
on my face. I also received a
spinal injury from that fallen
building so many years ago.
MINAMI
Ever since, I got pain in my right
leg. Nerve damage. The pain comes
in waves, sometimes a lot,
sometimes little. But there is
always a bit of pain.
A.J
Ah did notice that you walked with
a limp, just never thought much of
it.
Minami gives a comforting smile to her friend.
MINAMI
Anyway, I just need to rest.
A.J
Alright. Ah'll wait with ya.
Cyrus, Hazel and their friends, all dressed in ball room
attire, walk by them.
HAZEL
Hey ugly, I hope you didn't enter.
I'd hate to see your face messed up
even more when you cry.
They walk away as A.J stands, making a fist. Minami holds
her hand. She shakes her head, indicating to leave it go. In
the crowd, a group of friends talk excitedly.
GIRL DRESSED AS WITCH
Oh my God, I over heard one of the
judges! They say that cute boy from
the vocal program at IAU, Derek,
won! He's got the voice of a God.
GIRL DRESSED AS DOCTOR
I know right! I'm glad that most of
the vocal program students won. It
will look excellent on their
resumes. Besides, any other program
doesn't stand a chance.
Minami and A.J exchange worried looks.
A.J
That don' sound good.
MINAMI
Have faith, you'll see.
Her voice speaks in confidence, but worry shows in her blue
eyes. The MC of the night walks up to the stage, grabs the
mic and waves at a crowd of nearby ladies dressed as nurses.
MC
Welcome all to the Toronto Haunted
House!
MC
After looking through many entries,
we have our top 5 winners! Winners,
after the presentation is over,
come on up to get your money!
MC
And now, I present to you, the
winners of this years Halloween
contest!
The MC opens an envelope. As he names the winners, the faces
of each contestant is shown.
MC
Our first winner is Derek Beyit,
with his lovely song performance.
Our second winner is Hazel Fisher
and Cyrus Pierce, whose Halloween
duet was a knockout. Our third
winner is Nikky Crawford with a
lovely piano piece. Fourth winner
is James Ruben with a wonderful
spooky song.
The MC clears his throat and arranges his papers before
naming the last winner, letting the crowds excitement die
down.
A.J
Those are all vocal program kids.
They were right, we don' stand a
chance.
MC
And last but not least, our last
winner did something different and
made a presentation for us to see.
A judges favorite, our last winner
is....
Minami and A.J's eyes widen in shock and amazement as their
wining project is displayed; the video playing Minami's
drawings on a big screen and A.J's recorded voice and guitar
playing along with it.
FADE INTO THE PRESENTATION
It's Halloween night on a planet filled with monsters.
Candles and rotting pumpkins lay scattered on the land.
Trees shaped in haunted positions grow proudly. It's a
cloudy night, but the sky has opened for the moon. The moon
shines a path. In the distance, a wolves howl can be heard.
A.J
The moonlight bathes the road to
redemption. Sweet howls of the
night; the melody sings. Crazed yet
sane, blood shall be shed. War
rages on in the world.
The prisoner is behind bars, shackles holds his hands
together. He yells, but no one hears him; he is alone in a
prison filled with enemies.
A.J
Kill the horror that lies in the
soul, Unable to run free from sins
committed. Cry out, cry out;
silence fills the land. Poisoned
veins will stand alone again.
A tall, slender girl stands alone on a hill, her long silver
hair flowing in the wind. She motions for the army behind
her to follow. As she runs, she changes into a werewolf. The
dark general stands ready at the prison, shadowing the
light.
A.J
Behold thine beauty of sweet
summers night. Hail to the captive;
sweet innocence arises. Wanting
with ought knowing; unable to
achieve. Darkness fall's over the
land once again.
The female werewolf and her army is now fighting off the
prison guard soldiers. While she fights, the prisoner in the
cell has changed into a werewolf himself. He breaks though
the cell, though shackles still on his arms. The bodies of
many lie defeated on the ground.
A.J
Be swift for death for death shall
chase: killer of the night. Arise
the sun to darkness still. Wanting
grows stronger separated against
will. Death to many, death to all,
once again.
Elves, goblins, minotaurs and other races have reunited to
fight for one common cause. The male werewolf has joined the
fight. The war between the guards of the prison and the
races of its planet continue. The enemy general, a ghostly
being adorned with black armor, swings his blade, and with
his final blow, kills the female werewolf. The male werewolf
sees his lover fallen. His face shows utter sadness.
A.J
Races of the world reunite; self
inflicted damage. Captured once
more; break free from hell. Twice
dawn comes, blood still floods the
land. Clash of blades; 6 hits, 1
death.
The ghostly general beams with pride at his kill. The moral
of his enemy's now low at the defeat of their leader. The
male werewolf now fights with new energy, fighting with
revenge in his eyes. With one bite, he kills the general,
but not before getting stabbed with his sword.
A.J
Adorned blackness; victory arises.
Fighter of love, fighter of peace,
stroking blow through heart & soul.
Death has been defeated.
The people of the land rejoice as the war is over. They can
now celebrate their fallen heroes. Buried together are the
two werewolf lovers on a hot Halloween night.
A.J
Rest well sweet child, fear not no
more. Peaceful night now fills thy
heart. Young love will last
forever; sweet dream, eyes of
sorrow have lifted.
----END CHAPTER 6----
Minami has her head resting on her right hand, her left
lazily taking notes. Her eyes are slowly drifting into
sleep. She shakes her head violently to wake herself up,
though the dark circles under her eyes betray her.
TEACHER
Alright guys! Pack up your stuff!
Minami looks around, confused out of her mind. Her fellow
classmates are gathering their art supplies and jackets,
talking merrily amongst themselves. Minami grabs Stajianna
as she walks by Minami's desk.
MINAMI
I missed something, where is
everyone going? Class just
started... didn't it?
Stajianna straightens her floral patterned dress.
STAJIANNA
We're going to the nearby graveyard
to do some sketches remember? Mr
Fox told us yesterday that we were
going there, though he hasn't told
us why yet.
Minami eyes open up, a tad more alert now. She hastily grabs
her things, motioning for Stajianna to wait for her.
MINAMI
Erg, A.J was up most of the night
last night on the phone with her
dad, which kept me up. Soooooo
tired.
Stajianna looks impatient, watching the last student leave.
STAJIANNA
Hurry up, we're the last ones here.
Holding her sketchbook and ruler in one hand, she shoves
about 5 pencils in her pocket with the other. Grabbing her
black fedora hat and placing it on her head, she then makes
her way towards the exit.
MINAMI
OK! Let's go.
EXT. LOCAL TORONTO GRAVEYARD
Mr. Fox, stands in the graveyard, lecturing his eleven
students.
MR FOX
Alright guys! We have about 2 hours
before we need to head back to
school. I want all of you to draw
at least 5 different and unique
tombstones.
Stajianna raises her hand, while Minami looks around
excitedly.
MR FOX
Yes Staj?
Mr. Fox turns his gaze towards his student.
STAJIANNA
What are we drawing them for?
Mr Fox claps his hands together and then points excitedly at
Stajianna.
MR FOX
Great question Stajianna! Halloween
is coming up soon, so I want you
guys to do a short comic using
these gravestones as a reference.
He walks around the tombstones as he talks.
MR FOX
I want you to use the knowledge of
your past assignments for this one.
Work on your drapery, posing and
positive and negative spacing to
create good flow.
He dry washes his hands as he looks around at his students.
MR FOX
OK, any more questions? No? OK!
Happy drawing!
EXT. LOCAL TORONTO GRAVEYARD
Stajianna and Minami both sit with her legs crossed on the
grass. Pages of tombstone sketches are laid out in front of
Minami, while Stajianna has them neatly in a pile. Minami
however, is now working on a picture of two werewolves
instead of drawing more tombstone drawings. She holds onto
her right leg as she sketches. A group of her classmates sit
not far away from the two friends, talking to each other as
they draw a tombstone in the shape of an angel. Stajianna
glances towards Minami and sees her work.
STAJIANNA
Are those for that Halloween
contest?
MINAMI
Yup. These gravestone references
are going to go perfect with it
too.
Minami makes a thinking face.
MINAMI
A.J said once she finds her song
book, she's like 98.7% done with
her part.
STAJIANNA
Wow, that's specific.
Minami makes grins stupidly.
MINAMI
Well, I might be paraphrasing a
bit.
Minami leans in towards Stajianna, speaking in almost a
whisper as to not be heard by her nearby classmates. As she
leans in, she grabs her right leg tightly, and quickly hides
the pain in her face. This action goes unnoticed to
Stajianna.
MINAMI
Can you keep a secret?
STAJIANNA
Sure. I promise I wont tell anyone.
MINAMI
Ooo! You better make sure you can
keep that, because, if you don't,
you will get banned from the
planet!
Baffled, Stajianna replied.
STAJIANNA
What? Banned from the planet?
Minami shakes it off.
MINAMI
Never mind.
MINAMI
Anyway, A.J is having a really hard
time right now. So I decided, if we
win this contest, I'm going to give
her my half of the prize money.
Stajianna smiles sweetly at her friends nice gesture.
STAJIANNA
That's nice of you.
MINAMI
Well, she needs it more than I do
at the moment.
MINAMI
I'm just glad Mr Fox gave us this
assignment, because I'm going to
kill two birds with one pencil.
Minami looks at Stajianna, who gives her an odd look. Minami
answers, arms moving in an odd motion. *Description for Ryuu
here*
MINAMI
You know, cause we're artists and
we use pencils instead of rocks or
stones or whatever the saying is
and... Never mind.
Both girls begin to laugh, each enjoying the moment.
EXT. COLLEGE COURT YARD
Under the oddly shaped tree, sitting on the edge of the
fountain, Minami and A.J sit together working on their
Halloween project.
MINAMI
I'm glad you found your song book.
Too bad it was in the trash though.
A.J tries to rub off a stain on the corner of her book.
A.J
Yeah, too bad ketchup don' wanna
come off easily though.
A.J
So what do ya got?
Minami looks at A.J's lyrics while A.J looks at Minami's
drawings.
MINAMI
'Adorned blackness'? I see what you
did there.
A.J
Yup. Symbolism always works well
with the big wigs.
A.J leans forward, pointing at Minami's sketches, showing
her what she is talking about.
A.J
Ah also like how ya captured the
emotion on their faces. Ya can
really tell what's goin' on, even
though they don' talk.
Minami fist bumps A.J with a wide smile on her face.
MINAMI
We got this.
A.J
Time ta enter our final product?
MINAMI
Naturally.
A.J has a sudden wave of doubtfulness.
A.J
Think it's Halloween-ish enough?
Minami get's her papers together and looks reassuringly at
A.J.
MINAMI
I think the fact that it's a unique
fantasy story set on Halloween is
good enough.
Confidence returning, A.J replies.
A.J
Yeah. Yer right. Let's go enter
this project!
EXT. TORONTO HAUNTED MANSION
It's Halloween night and there are an abundance of
trick-or-treaters walking around. A shot of the Haunted
mansion.
INT. TORONTO HAUNTED MANSION DANCE HALL
Minami is dressed as a traditional Japanese priestess, while
A.J wears her normal everyday wear. Minami looks to be in
pain while A.J looks amusingly around the crowd. The room is
filled with party-goers, all dress up in various costumes.
The room is heavily decorated, with spiderwebs and coffins
and blood spattered walls.
A.J
Man, Ah'm kind of nervous. Ah hope
we win.
A.J notices Minami bending over, holding her right leg.
A.J
You OK Mina? Yer not havin' an
attack are ya? Need ta lie down?
MINAMI
No worries, I'm fine. Though I do
need to sit for a bit. Come on,
let's find a seat.
A.J
What's a matter hun?
Minami bites her knuckles as they take a seat on a nearby
bench.
MINAMI
Nothing. Nothing major. It will
pass.
Concerned her friend isn't well again, A.J grabs Minami's
hand to reassure her everything is OK.
A.J
Are ya sure?
Minami looks down at A.J's hand. A.J noticed what she had
done and quickly retrieves it.
MINAMI
You should go have fun. I just need
to wait until the pain passes. It
comes in waves.
A.J
Pain? What pain? Why are ya in
pain?
It's now Minami's turn to shy away, biting her lip and
looking to the ground. She replies, keeping her gaze on the
floor.
MINAMI
Remember that earthquake I told you
about? Well, I got more than a scar
on my face. I also received a
spinal injury from that fallen
building so many years ago.
MINAMI
Ever since, I got pain in my right
leg. Nerve damage. The pain comes
in waves, sometimes a lot,
sometimes little. But there is
always a bit of pain.
A.J
Ah did notice that you walked with
a limp, just never thought much of
it.
Minami gives a comforting smile to her friend.
MINAMI
Anyway, I just need to rest.
A.J
Alright. Ah'll wait with ya.
Cyrus, Hazel and their friends, all dressed in ball room
attire, walk by them.
HAZEL
Hey ugly, I hope you didn't enter.
I'd hate to see your face messed up
even more when you cry.
They walk away as A.J stands, making a fist. Minami holds
her hand. She shakes her head, indicating to leave it go. In
the crowd, a group of friends talk excitedly.
GIRL DRESSED AS WITCH
Oh my God, I over heard one of the
judges! They say that cute boy from
the vocal program at IAU, Derek,
won! He's got the voice of a God.
GIRL DRESSED AS DOCTOR
I know right! I'm glad that most of
the vocal program students won. It
will look excellent on their
resumes. Besides, any other program
doesn't stand a chance.
Minami and A.J exchange worried looks.
A.J
That don' sound good.
MINAMI
Have faith, you'll see.
Her voice speaks in confidence, but worry shows in her blue
eyes. The MC of the night walks up to the stage, grabs the
mic and waves at a crowd of nearby ladies dressed as nurses.
MC
Welcome all to the Toronto Haunted
House!
MC
After looking through many entries,
we have our top 5 winners! Winners,
after the presentation is over,
come on up to get your money!
MC
And now, I present to you, the
winners of this years Halloween
contest!
The MC opens an envelope. As he names the winners, the faces
of each contestant is shown.
MC
Our first winner is Derek Beyit,
with his lovely song performance.
Our second winner is Hazel Fisher
and Cyrus Pierce, whose Halloween
duet was a knockout. Our third
winner is Nikky Crawford with a
lovely piano piece. Fourth winner
is James Ruben with a wonderful
spooky song.
The MC clears his throat and arranges his papers before
naming the last winner, letting the crowds excitement die
down.
A.J
Those are all vocal program kids.
They were right, we don' stand a
chance.
MC
And last but not least, our last
winner did something different and
made a presentation for us to see.
A judges favorite, our last winner
is....
Minami and A.J's eyes widen in shock and amazement as their
wining project is displayed; the video playing Minami's
drawings on a big screen and A.J's recorded voice and guitar
playing along with it.
FADE INTO THE PRESENTATION
It's Halloween night on a planet filled with monsters.
Candles and rotting pumpkins lay scattered on the land.
Trees shaped in haunted positions grow proudly. It's a
cloudy night, but the sky has opened for the moon. The moon
shines a path. In the distance, a wolves howl can be heard.
A.J
The moonlight bathes the road to
redemption. Sweet howls of the
night; the melody sings. Crazed yet
sane, blood shall be shed. War
rages on in the world.
The prisoner is behind bars, shackles holds his hands
together. He yells, but no one hears him; he is alone in a
prison filled with enemies.
A.J
Kill the horror that lies in the
soul, Unable to run free from sins
committed. Cry out, cry out;
silence fills the land. Poisoned
veins will stand alone again.
A tall, slender girl stands alone on a hill, her long silver
hair flowing in the wind. She motions for the army behind
her to follow. As she runs, she changes into a werewolf. The
dark general stands ready at the prison, shadowing the
light.
A.J
Behold thine beauty of sweet
summers night. Hail to the captive;
sweet innocence arises. Wanting
with ought knowing; unable to
achieve. Darkness fall's over the
land once again.
The female werewolf and her army is now fighting off the
prison guard soldiers. While she fights, the prisoner in the
cell has changed into a werewolf himself. He breaks though
the cell, though shackles still on his arms. The bodies of
many lie defeated on the ground.
A.J
Be swift for death for death shall
chase: killer of the night. Arise
the sun to darkness still. Wanting
grows stronger separated against
will. Death to many, death to all,
once again.
Elves, goblins, minotaurs and other races have reunited to
fight for one common cause. The male werewolf has joined the
fight. The war between the guards of the prison and the
races of its planet continue. The enemy general, a ghostly
being adorned with black armor, swings his blade, and with
his final blow, kills the female werewolf. The male werewolf
sees his lover fallen. His face shows utter sadness.
A.J
Races of the world reunite; self
inflicted damage. Captured once
more; break free from hell. Twice
dawn comes, blood still floods the
land. Clash of blades; 6 hits, 1
death.
The ghostly general beams with pride at his kill. The moral
of his enemy's now low at the defeat of their leader. The
male werewolf now fights with new energy, fighting with
revenge in his eyes. With one bite, he kills the general,
but not before getting stabbed with his sword.
A.J
Adorned blackness; victory arises.
Fighter of love, fighter of peace,
stroking blow through heart & soul.
Death has been defeated.
The people of the land rejoice as the war is over. They can
now celebrate their fallen heroes. Buried together are the
two werewolf lovers on a hot Halloween night.
A.J
Rest well sweet child, fear not no
more. Peaceful night now fills thy
heart. Young love will last
forever; sweet dream, eyes of
sorrow have lifted.
----END CHAPTER 6----
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*Edit* I've changed some things in the story, to make it flow better. Also, I've changed the school from a university to a college. So, I removed some things, added some others. In some chapters, not much changed. In others, lot's changed-ish. So if you could take your time to re-read it & critic it, I would love it! Let me know what you think, good or bad! Note that I'm keeping the name IAU for now until I can think of a better name. It might have 'University' in its name but it's no longer a university. *End Edit*
First off, the title refers to Halloween beginning. I might change the chapter title later, it's the best I could think of at the moment heh.
As for the going to the graveyard to draw references, I totally did that in college. Only my teacher didn;t tell us what we were drawing them for. My friends explained to me what 'spooning' was with examples in this graveyard lol. Good times.
Also, the song in this story is a song I wrote back in high school. It’s a complete story of an RP my cousin & I did, but symbolized. It’s finally going t o have some use as it’s appearing in the next chapter of ‘South’. (It has a tune! If you want to sing along, go here to hear what it would sound like: www.youtube.com/watch?v=KWMuCS… … I know its a tune to an already existing song, but meh).
Anywho, critic away!
A little about the story:
A.J White has always been sure of herself; knowing what she wanted to in life and who she was. But after a night of bonding with her roommate Minami, the head strong girl begins to question herself. With this new strong friendship formed, will their relationship turn into more than just friends? Will the world accept them?
VOLUME 2:
Chapter 8: Minami - New Discoveries fav.me/d5s3voe
Chapter 9: A.J - Moonlight Date fav.me/d5thiqn
Chapter 10: Minami - The Voice fav.me/d5ve5wy
Chapter 11: A.J - Spiritual Awakening fav.me/d6hi6kh
Chapter 12: Minami - Aggressive fav.me/d6u19nz
Chapter 13: A.J - Interruptions fav.me/d6z9dd4
VOLUME 1:
Chapter 1: A.J - School of Dreams fav.me/d4vl18b
Chapter 2: Minami - A Friendship is Born fav.me/d4xy5t7
Chapter 3: A.J - A New Day fav.me/d4y4czz
Chapter 4: Minami - Writing on the Wall fav.me/d4z9zlg
Chapter 5: A.J - Day Dream fav.me/d50kzgq
Chapter 6: Minami - It Begins (HERE!)
Chapter 7: A.J - On the Dance Floor fav.me/d5bxkkm
IMPORTANT NOTE: The preview image is of Minami, drawn by the ever most awesome *milkydayy. It's part of a commission I asked him to do of both Mina & A.J together (you can see part of A.J's blond hair to the left). ORIGINAL DEVIATION: fav.me/d4waqut Like what you see? You should probably commission this deserving artist. You wont be disappointed.
Oh yeah, this is going to be made into a comic, drawn by the ever most awesome *ryuuen. But I'm not entirely sure on how to write scripts for comics, so I'm writing it in film script version for now, but you get the gist of what's going on.
Story© by =Sorren-Chan
Comic artwork© by *ryuuen
Preview artwork image© by *milkydayy
First off, the title refers to Halloween beginning. I might change the chapter title later, it's the best I could think of at the moment heh.
As for the going to the graveyard to draw references, I totally did that in college. Only my teacher didn;t tell us what we were drawing them for. My friends explained to me what 'spooning' was with examples in this graveyard lol. Good times.
Also, the song in this story is a song I wrote back in high school. It’s a complete story of an RP my cousin & I did, but symbolized. It’s finally going t o have some use as it’s appearing in the next chapter of ‘South’. (It has a tune! If you want to sing along, go here to hear what it would sound like: www.youtube.com/watch?v=KWMuCS… … I know its a tune to an already existing song, but meh).
Anywho, critic away!
A little about the story:
A.J White has always been sure of herself; knowing what she wanted to in life and who she was. But after a night of bonding with her roommate Minami, the head strong girl begins to question herself. With this new strong friendship formed, will their relationship turn into more than just friends? Will the world accept them?
VOLUME 2:
Chapter 8: Minami - New Discoveries fav.me/d5s3voe
Chapter 9: A.J - Moonlight Date fav.me/d5thiqn
Chapter 10: Minami - The Voice fav.me/d5ve5wy
Chapter 11: A.J - Spiritual Awakening fav.me/d6hi6kh
Chapter 12: Minami - Aggressive fav.me/d6u19nz
Chapter 13: A.J - Interruptions fav.me/d6z9dd4
VOLUME 1:
Chapter 1: A.J - School of Dreams fav.me/d4vl18b
Chapter 2: Minami - A Friendship is Born fav.me/d4xy5t7
Chapter 3: A.J - A New Day fav.me/d4y4czz
Chapter 4: Minami - Writing on the Wall fav.me/d4z9zlg
Chapter 5: A.J - Day Dream fav.me/d50kzgq
Chapter 6: Minami - It Begins (HERE!)
Chapter 7: A.J - On the Dance Floor fav.me/d5bxkkm
IMPORTANT NOTE: The preview image is of Minami, drawn by the ever most awesome *milkydayy. It's part of a commission I asked him to do of both Mina & A.J together (you can see part of A.J's blond hair to the left). ORIGINAL DEVIATION: fav.me/d4waqut Like what you see? You should probably commission this deserving artist. You wont be disappointed.
Oh yeah, this is going to be made into a comic, drawn by the ever most awesome *ryuuen. But I'm not entirely sure on how to write scripts for comics, so I'm writing it in film script version for now, but you get the gist of what's going on.
Story© by =Sorren-Chan
Comic artwork© by *ryuuen
Preview artwork image© by *milkydayy
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