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Well, here it is
The long awaited and over hyped, somewhat poorly made first entry to what will probably kill me in this tournament
Regardless of such, I hope that it has come out rather good
I apologize for any major or hideous errors
I find my english to be getting worse every day to the point that it is nearly impossible to write anything half way decent
It is alright, I guess
I am liking the second part much better
This is mostly my attempt to portray the beginning of a plot device for my run in BloodSport and to show that chip in the intro wasn't just a one time thing
But rather, a key to a longer road or something like that, I dunno man
It is the early morning and I can not be arsed to edit this any further - let alone make a good description
So, I tried to show my understanding of Rik as a character and tried to paint him in the light of a hero
Rather than Strelok
Hopefully I succeeded
There is a lot of talking and what not in this, I promise to make up for it with the next part having a lot of action and "Oh shit" moments
Irkens/Invader Zim (c) Viacom/Jhonen Vasquez
Strelok (c)
Rikalo (c)
Well, here it is
The long awaited and over hyped, somewhat poorly made first entry to what will probably kill me in this tournament
Regardless of such, I hope that it has come out rather good
I apologize for any major or hideous errors
I find my english to be getting worse every day to the point that it is nearly impossible to write anything half way decent
It is alright, I guess
I am liking the second part much better
This is mostly my attempt to portray the beginning of a plot device for my run in BloodSport and to show that chip in the intro wasn't just a one time thing
But rather, a key to a longer road or something like that, I dunno man
It is the early morning and I can not be arsed to edit this any further - let alone make a good description
So, I tried to show my understanding of Rik as a character and tried to paint him in the light of a hero
Rather than Strelok
Hopefully I succeeded
There is a lot of talking and what not in this, I promise to make up for it with the next part having a lot of action and "Oh shit" moments
Irkens/Invader Zim (c) Viacom/Jhonen Vasquez
Strelok (c)
Rikalo (c)
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O3o....I so feel doomed right now. XD
Your characterization of Rik is amazing! And the build up to when the fight began had me on edge.
Your characterization of Rik is amazing! And the build up to when the fight began had me on edge.