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Well, here it is
The long awaited and over hyped, somewhat poorly made first entry to what will probably kill me in this tournament
Regardless of such, I hope that it has come out rather good
I apologize for any major or hideous errors
I find my english to be getting worse every day to the point that it is nearly impossible to write anything half way decent

It is alright, I guess
I am liking the second part much better
This is mostly my attempt to portray the beginning of a plot device for my run in BloodSport and to show that chip in the intro wasn't just a one time thing
But rather, a key to a longer road or something like that, I dunno man
It is the early morning and I can not be arsed to edit this any further - let alone make a good description

So, I tried to show my understanding of Rik as a character and tried to paint him in the light of a hero
Rather than Strelok
Hopefully I succeeded
There is a lot of talking and what not in this, I promise to make up for it with the next part having a lot of action and "Oh shit" moments

Irkens/Invader Zim (c) Viacom/Jhonen Vasquez

Strelok (c) :iconirken-defect:

Rikalo (c) :iconleonthorn:

:iconthe-bloodsport:
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O3o....I so feel doomed right now. XD

Your characterization of Rik is amazing! And the build up to when the fight began had me on edge.