Anime girl

I LOVE HOW YOU DO EYES!!! her face looks great in this one. Her shoulders could be more rounded and they should slope down (like her right side) also the collar bone should be down further on her chest. Something I noticed about the collar bone is that it angles up like it's going to connect to the shoulders. (Sorry that's difficult to explain...) The Hair should be smoother and more fluid strokes so the ends of her hair don't look as choppy and her hair could have a shine. I can see an improvement in this deviation from your previous ones. Keep up the good work you are doing great~!!