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Pickup Line

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A couple of guys from my 'Agency' series.

Now, I really could use some feedback on this.
I do like it but I don't love it. I could use some ideas on how to punch it up a little (pun intended).

Throwing in a few more guys would be a start and bringing the girl into the foreground might help (though I do like her look of exasperation). What do you think?

In case you're wondering, this is scripted as the first meeting between the young Alex character and the older but not really wiser Thomas character. This is where they form the initial bonds of friendship and respect (which is unusual for Alex who has little respect for any authority figure)
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The action in this scene just blows me away. You put a lot of thought into this and a lot of time. This is amazing!