HS LC - minicomic jake: Be in pain p2

Homestuck Fangame Lost Chums - minicomic jake: Be in pain page 2 of 2

Ok second page to this:


EDIT: ~MaahesKaramorita drew fanart : D Jake and Dirk look so cute~


I am really happy with this : D Jake's cold look in panel 4 finally turned out exactly as iI wanted to. Which took a while.xD This whole page was rather difficult. I loove all of the expressions though. And poor Dirk. He has no idea what is suddenly wrong with Jake...

And since I think there are also a lot of people who don't really know what's going on I'll explain a little: Lost Chums is a fangame thing I'm working on which is going to be a 2D platform game (kinda based on the SNES game Lost Vikings but with a lot of differences too). And these comics are just random scenes because I am almost done with plotting out everything and I LOVE the plot.

It's an AU and there is no sburb. The alpha and beta kids live in some villages near forests. Jake and Jade got kidnapped by the alien jack noir with his spaceship. Karkat and Vriska have also been kidnapped from alternia and are imprisoned. They will be freed later on.

More about Jake:
Dirk, Jane and Roxy free Jake but don't know that he was experimented on. He got a chip installed into his brain. While they keep exploring the space ship to find a way to get home (because it is in space now) jake's behaviour starts to change slightly and he is having pretty heavy headaches from time to time. And then he has another onset of a headache which is so bad that he falls unconscious. And then we have this page here. Jake just turned. He is completely controlled by the chip now and serves Jack Noir. After this part he imprisons everyone but fails to catch Dirk. Then this happens:


Oh god this is getting too long I'll shut up now sorry...

Other comic pages I drew for this:


I thought I'd be nice and link all of the comics I did for this so far in chronological order. Here:
2.5 John: Get Trapped
4.3 Jake and Dirk: Be Best Bros 1
4.3 Jake and Dirk: Be Best Bros 2
7.1 Jake: Be in Pain 1
7.1 Jake: Be in Pain 2
7.1 Jake: Change
7.5 Dirk: Lose Hope