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Doctor Who: One and a Half Doctors part 6.0

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INT. POLICE STATION - DAY

Doctor 10 walks up to the police station and goes in. He is
greeted by almost everyone who is there (they know him very
well). Police man 1 come sup to him. they go through a door
into a hallway. they turn into an office with plaque reading
'John Smith -Special Investigator' nailed to it

                          POLICE MAN 1
      (rhetorical)
it happened again?


                          DOCTOR 10
two men, I have their things


Doctor 10 reaches into his pockets and deposites the
contense

                          DOCTOR 10
again, all things metal and
plastic. whatever it is consumes
all biological matter.


                          POLICE MAN 1
then why do the clothes go too?


                          DOCTOR 10
cotten is a plant product, so is
wool. most string material is. the
odd thing is there were three men,
one was spared. He ran but i could
recognize him. I'm going to type
up a report then head out to find
the survivor.


                          POLICE MAN 1
before you do I should tell you
that two people were in here today
that were looking for you


                          DOCTOR 10
You told me that if that started
again you would jail people. Why
did you let them in?


                          POLICE MAN 1
well, they didn't come in looking
for you. They were found
unconsious, mugged. After the
paramedics patched them up they
were sent here to be questioned.
that's when they asked for you.


                          DOCTOR 10
could have staged that mugging you
know.


                          POLICE MAN 1
no, they were pretty beat up. They
didn't seem like the kind of
people who would self infilct
wounds that bad. plus they
reported stolen items, two wedding
rings and an engagement ring


Doctor 10 fingers the three rings from the pile of stuff

                          DOCTOR 10
what did you do with them?


                          POLICE MAN 1
they didnt ask for you directly,
George overheard them talking
about finding you.


                          DOCTOR 10
      (impatiant)
And what did he do?


                          POLICE MAN 1
well.. he...


                          DOCTOR 10
      (elongated)
yeeeees?


                          POLICE MAN 1
told them to go to Canary Warf


                          DOCTOR 10
      (enraged)
WHAT!? Torchwood!? George sent
them to Torchwood!? what was he
thinking!?


                          POLICE MAN 1
I doubt he was thinking anything
Doctor


                          DOCTOR 10
      (gives the
       policeman a look)
i have to catch up to them before
they get there!


Doctor 10 heads out his door. His Phone rings. Doctor 10
stops dead. He walks back to his desk and picks up the phone

                          DOCTOR 10
      (knowing it is
       ROSE)
hello?



INT. TORCHWOOD AND POLICE STATION - DAY

the camera switches view to whoever is talking

                          ROSE
Doctor you know it's me. I was
calling because Harriet Jones was
wondering where you are.


                          DOCTOR 10
if she was wondering then she must
know where i am now


                          ROSE
you know I meant IS


                          DOCTOR 10
yeah, yeah. I'm um, I'm... In
Downing Street, helped get the New
Cyber Act passed.


                          ROSE
Thanks for lying, I know you're at
the police station and we'll talk
about that later. You need to come
here now, The Doctor's back.


                          DOCTOR 10
he's back? you're sure? I'll be
right there.


                          POLICE MAN 1
who's back?


                          DOCTOR 10
The Doctor


                          POLICE MAN 1
Doctor Who?


                          DOCTOR 10
It's just The Doctor


                          POLICE MAN 1
      (very confused)
I thought you were the Doctor!


Doctor 10 walks out his office. he gathers speed at he heads
out. Police man 1 follows.

Cut to Doctor 10 and Police Man 1 running up to Torchwood
Tower the doors open automatically for him. Inside the
reception room the lift opens up. DOCTOR 10 trots in. Police
Man 1 is stopped by The Receptionist.

Cut To DOCTOR 11, sonic screwdriver in hand a glass jar in
the other. He is walking by Big Ben. He is following the
dust devil. they head towards Big Ben. Big Ben strikes
(hour doesnt matter) the dust devil dissipates instantly and
falls to the ground as a pile of dust. DOCTOR 11 scans it
with his screwdriver and the pile starts to swirl again, not
the part he is scanning. DOCTOR 11 hurredly scoops as much
as he can into the jar. He accidentaly touches the swirling
part. Clock strikes again and the dust falls

                          DOCTOR 11
      (whipping his hand
       away)
YEOUCH!


CUT to his hand. Just above the knuckles to about an inch
below (scattered between life-line and third joint) covered
in red dots that start to bleed. Clock stops striking. Dust
swirls first in the direction of the wind, then towards the
Doctor who has just finished sealing the jar with the sonic.
He whips around and turns the sonic on high. Some of the
closest dust falls, the rest just sways in the air. The
Doctor turns off the sonic, they start to come at him again.
He turns it back on, changing settings. after a few tries
the sonic makes an eirie noise. The Dust sways more slowly,
like a snake being charmed. The Dust farther away is not
effected and start to move faster creating a static sound
that snaps the hypnotised Dust back. DOCTOR 11 runs, back
the way he came.

Cut to DOCTOR 10 in a police car and pulling up to
Torchwood Tower. He is in the driver's seat, POLICE MAN 1 is
breathing hard.

                          POLICE MAN 1
Sir, you sped the whole way!


                          DOCTOR 10
      (getting out of
       the car)
so give me a ticket, here (tossing
POLICE MAN 1 the keys) drive her
back, I won't need to.


                          POLICE MAN 1
I'm not coming with you?


                          DOCTOR 10
Nope


POLICE MAN 1 grumbles as he switches seats and drives off.
DOCTOR 10 runs up to the entrance which dissapeared just
before he steps through.

Cut To Rose's office PETE is not there anymore

                          ROSE
So the Tardis explodes and rips
the universe apart and the Doctor
had to fly a prison box into the
explosion? how did he live?


                          AMY
I don't really understand that
part. He ceased to exist until I
remebered him. that's all I know.
It probably makes perfect sense to
him


                          ROSE
It always does


in the left corner of the wall behind rose, a panel the size
of a door extends and moves asside, revealing DOCTOR 10.
DOCTOR 10 steps out, still carring the bag of stuff
collected from the dust attack.

                          DOCTOR 10
      (looking around)
So are these the companions? I
always had a way of picking up
pretty girls didn't I?


                          RORY
What did you just say?


                          ROSE
      (blushing)
What's in the bag? something for
the President?


                          DOCTOR 10
      (dumps stuff on
       the desk)
stuff I found, two people
dissapeared, this was left


AMY and RORY's rings clink on the desk. DOCTOR 10 picks them
up

                          DOCTOR 10
this stuff could be anyones, but
these rings, I don't think they
bought them, stole them more like.
the peices of clothes that
survived are huge, no way their
fingers were so skinny


                          AMY
      (going up to
       DOCTOR 10)
OH my god! (swiping them from
DOCTOR 10 and going back to RORY)
look!


                          DOCTOR 10
HEY! You can't take those! they're
stolen goods!


AMY and RORY put their rings back on. RORY puts AMY's on for
her and visa versa. ROSE and DOCTOR 10 stare.

                          AMY
      (While the above
       direction above
       is happening)
Yeah, stolen from us!


                          ROSE
Are you two married?


                          RORY
Yep, The Doctor was taking us on a
honeymoon. we still haven't gotten
to any of the desinations he's
talked about


                          ROSE
      (glancing to AMY)
i just assumed you


                          AMY
fell for the Doctor? Are you nuts?
I mean, he's ben my best friend
since I was seven.


                          RORY
I still find that weird. We all
thought she was nuts, that he was
imaginary. she made me dress up as
him!


DOCTOR 10, ROSE, and AMY snicker.

                          RORY
It wasnt that funny!


AMY hugs him affectionitaly

                          AMY
Yeah it was.


a light appears on ROSE's desk, Beeping. ROSE presses her
hand on the desk and it turns on again

                          MARTIN
We found it ma'm security cam PS
AA2


                          ROSE
give me a visual


The wall behind ROSE becomes glossy and becomes a video link
to the security camera. The Tardis off the side, and a bit
blurry

                          ROSE
center it please and zoom in


The camera view shifts and zooms. the Tardis becomes clear

                          AMY
      (pointing)
That's it!


                          ROSE
It looks different, I don't know what it
is...


                          DOCTOR 10
      (shrugging)
The Tardis changes its appearence
when damaged, the rooms move
around as well, but the outside
has not changed so drastically
before, it always looked old


                          RORY
shouldn't we go?


                          DOCTOR 10
Right! we should, the Tardis can
scan these items, see what came
into contact with them.


                          ROSE
we can take a car, I don't want
people to see us walking


                          AMY
what are we waiting for!?


AMY starts to walk to the door. ROSE and DOCTOR 10 walk to
the opening in the wall

                          RORY
AMY i think the car is that way



INT. WELL, UM LOTS OF PLACES, STARTS IN A GARAGE - DAY

in short they end up in a garage will hundreds of cars, all
look bassicaly the same, silver compacts, but the licens
plates are different. with alternation between number and
letter. 4 numbers four letters. ROSE's is 0A1B2A3C. the next
car is 4A5D6A7E. They get into ROSE's and drive out. they
drive up to another level, filled with normal cars of all
makes and colours. The Torchwood cars are beneath a real
parking garage but on a staff only level with a locked
entrance.

Cut To the car pulling up to the Tardis. ROSE pushes a
botton on the dashboard.

                          ROSE
All Torchwood cars have perception
filters in them, stops people from
breaking into them. because tht
used to happen alot and then there
were people driving cars with
alien tech in them, bad things
happened


They get out of the car, and go up to the Tardis. AMY
knocks. no answer. ROSE and DOCTOR 10 just stare in longing
at it

                          AMY
Doctor? are you in there?


no answer. AMY tries the door. nothing

                          AMY
I dont have a key!


ever since she got out of the car, a spot on ROSE's chest
has been glowing, a chain is around her neck, but whatever
is on it was tucked in her shirt. She just notices now and
hurridly pulls out her key which changes shape in her hand.

                          ROSE
      (ripping it from
       the chain)
I never thought i would get to use
this again


                          DOCTOR 10
Never in a million years, I wonder
if it still looks the same!


Tardis door clicks and ROSE opens the door slowly,
dramatically, as she and Doctor 10 look in, the light
shining on their faces

                        FADE OUT
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and the tardis is now sparkly!