Doctor Who: One and a Half Doctors Part 6.5

  ROSE
Oh my, i can't believe it.


                          DOCTOR 10
      (smiling, rushing
       in)
it's so beautiful!


Follow DOCTOR 10 into the Tardis, followed by ROSE then AMY
and RORY.

                          DOCTOR 10
               (looks around then to AMY and
RORY)
WOW, does this look different.
a good different, definetly
a good different.


DOCTOR 10 explore in this order, all dialog takes place
while it happens : the console, evey botton, the railing, up
to the second floor door, down the stairs under the console.
ROSE wanders slower, up to the console and around back to
stand next to AMY and RORY

                          DOCTOR 10
      (admiringly)
It's sleek, neat and tidy, i was
starting to get tired of the coral
formation. it is very shiny and
colourful. OH the bottons changed,
well not all of them. the zig zag
plotter is still here (pulls the
zig zag plotter which activates a
noise) ok bad idea. oh a new
helmick ragulator! and the blue
bottons changed possition!


                          RORY
you mean the blue stabalizers?


                          DOCTOR 10
the what?


                          RORY
they stabalize the Tardis in rough
landings


                          DOCTOR 10
really? would've liked to have
known that 700 years ago eh Rose?


                          ROSE
yeah, would have saved us a lot of
bruises. how did you know those
were stabalizers?


                          RORY
River Song, Right Amy?


AMY nods

                          DOCTOR 10
you met good ol River? oh look! a
downstairs!


goes down stairs to the under console, touching it and
tapping it

                          DOCTOR 10
this is brilliant, no more opening
the heavy metal hatch, that was
always a pain, now you can just
stand right near the problem,
easy! I'm going to go check out
rooms, you want to come Rose?

                          ROSE
I think i will just stay here


                          DOCTOR 10
suit yourself (runs up to the
second floor door)


                          AMY
Uh, Um, Doctor? that is our room.


                          DOCTOR 10
what's that?


                          AMY
      (pointing at
       herself and Rory)
Mine and Rory's


                          DOCTOR 10
Oh! oh. yes, I'll check out a
different room then (walks down to
console level and through a
passage way)


                          ROSE
It has changed quite abit, it is
quite roomy.


ROSE delicatly touches the console, like stroking an old
home that you sold but is now abandoned. moves to look over
the railing, and walks back to AMY and RORY.

                          ROSE
      (nostalgicly)
It's amazing, isnt it?


                          AMY
what?


                          ROSE
Traveling, with him. The Doctor. I
know you think so. Best feeling in
the world right? i thought it was
never going to end


                          AMY
I dont want it to, but i know it
will, I mean, me and Rory, we plan
to start a family.


                          RORY
      (grumpily)
sometimes i can't wait for it to
end


                          ROSE
you sound like Mickey!


The Tardis door opens suddenly as DOCTOR 11 runs in,
clutching his bleeding hand and the blood covered jar. he
walks right up to the console then sits down. there is an
akward silence.

                          DOCTOR 11
Amy you're back good. Nurse Boy, i
need bandgages, their in the
external left panel, Amy i need
you to put this jar top down in
the port by the, thingy, you know.
it will fit, make sure the
contents drain completely.


Rory gets the bandages and AMY takes the Jar, trying and
failing to avaid getting blood on her hands.

                          DOCTOR 11
Rose, prep the scanner for Bio
life, microscopic setting 56,
sentient


ROSE startled by DOCTOR 11's calm reaction to seeing her
does not go to the scanner, she studies the DOCTOR's new
appearnece with distaste , RORY applies steralizing alcohol
to DOCTOR 11's hand, DOCTOR 11 winces

                          DOCTOR 11
You guys won't believe this I
found this Dust stuff, it seems it
eats things, living things, i
followed it up to Big Ben and when
the clock struck it fainted, ROSE!
why arent you setting the scanner?
I thought I just told you-


pauses, looks at Rose, and rubs his eyes with his good hand,
looks again, so confused it is silly

                          DOCTOR 11
Am i seeing things?, Did the Dust
go through my skull? Amy, do you
see her? Rory? I'm not going mad
right?


                          ROSE
      (tearing up)
Doctor? is that you?


                          DOCTOR 11
Not if you're not Rose


                          ROSE
      (smilling)
You're definitely mad, as mad as
you ever were


ROSE runs "up" to DOCTOR 11, (Rory was in the middle of
bandaging his hand, but steps back), and they embrace,
Doctor 11 pats ROSE on the back then screams

                          DOCTOR 11
Wrong hand! Damn, bloody hand!


as the DOCTOR 11's hand is in mid swing, RORY seizes it and
starts to clean it again, and will bandage it after DOCTOR
11 and ROSE let go of each other

                          ROSE
      (chuckling and
       crying)
I missed you, so much


                          DOCTOR 11
I missed you too.


They let go. ROSE takes DOCTOR 11's good hand in both of
hers

                          ROSE
      (wiping eyes on
       sleeve)
You've changed again i noticed


                          DOCTOR 11
you havent, not a day older


                          ROSE
I know when your lying, it's been
5 years!


                          DOCTOR 11
It cant be! you're only 3 months
ahead!


                          ROSE
any you have a time machine, or
did you forget that?


                          RORY
Doctor, did you see this wound? it
is really strange.


                          DOCTOR 11
how so Rory?


RORY takes DOCTOR 11's wounded hand's wrist and held it palm
down. blood dripped down, from the palm, not blood pooled on
top to drip down. then RORY turned it palm up. the back of
DOCTOR11's hand bled but no blood pooled on his palm, in
fact the bleeding stopped there. turning his hand vertical,
it bled from both sides.

                          DOCTOR 11
incredible, absolutely incredible.
I think i know why. Help me to the
scanner!


RORY and ROSE take DOCTOR 11 by the armpits and lift him, he
staggers to the scanner. ROSE, RORY and AMY gather behind
him. Using one hand DOCTOR 11 sets the scanner and activates
it. a light shines on his hand and an images starts to
render on the screen. but before it fully forms a splash is
heard and everyone in the console room looks up. wet
footsteps are heard

                          DOCTOR 11
You didnt come alone, did you
Rose?


                          ROSE
oh yeah, I was going to tell you


Soaking wet, DOCTOR 10 staggers in

                          DOCTOR 10
The pool is not in the same place


DOCTOR 10 stops talking, stares at DOCTOR 11, who is
staring. AMY RORY and ROSE also stare at DOCTOR 10. DOCTOR
10 walks up to DOCTOR 11, right up to his face.

                          DOCTOR 10
when did he get here? why did no
one tell me?


                          DOCTOR 11
      (breathing hard)
That was a nice entrance, I can't
believe I was that rude.


DOCTOR 11 faints from blood loss. RORY will start to bandage
his hand up, and prop him up on the console

                          DOCTOR 10
This regeneration looks wimpy,


DOCTOR 11 jerks into consciosness

                          DOCTOR 11
      (laughing)
woah! lost it there for a sec. I
need you to be more aware Rory,
why did you stop bandaging.
nevermind, just remember next
time. hello Rose, I see you and
and um, what are you called?


                          DOCTOR 10
kept it The Doctor, nothing else
worked.


                          DOCTOR 11
I'm not calling you that! it will
get too confusing, how about John
Smith? good ol standby


                          AMY
Since when?


                          DOCTOR 11
since always, I've use it all the
time


                          AMY
No you haven't!


                          DOCTOR 11
sure i have, that one time, with
the thing


                          RORY
no you didnt.


                          DOCTOR 11
well i used too. all the time.


                          DOCTOR 10
I'm not going by John Smith


                          DOCTOR 11
You have a different name in mind
then? no? I thought not. So! Rose
I see you and John have been doing
fine! got married, any kids?


awkward silance

                          DOCTOR 11
guess not, hows Jackie and Pete?


                          ROSE
Their doing fine, have two kids
now, Jason and Nattily. weren't we
just scanning your hand?


AMY looks back at the scanner, confused. RORY looks and
shows surprise

                          RORY
Doctor! what did you do to your
hand!


                          DOCTOR 10
I didnt do any- oh


                          DOCTOR 11
some Dust thing touched it, let me
see, what's so weird


                          RORY
there are hundreds of small holes
running straight through your
hand, completely straight. passed
through veins, arteries and bone,
and anything else you might have
that we humans dont


Cut To scanner. CGI image of Hand in blue grid. lines go
through. noise made as image is zoomed, the lines become
tunnels, straight and true.the tunnels have differnt
entrance points and exit points but all are staight and all
go through

                          DOCTOR 11
This explains why i would bleed
down, the blood went with gravity.
if i just cut my palm it would
bleed out, but since it goes
through it bled down, whichever
way that happend to be. I think
the Dust, whatever it is went
right through my hand, eating what
it touched, leaving perfect
tunnels in my hand. i wonder what
would hav happened if it caught up
to me?


                          AMY
I dont want to think about it


                          DOCTOR 10
you would be gone, no trace.
happened to the muggers. the Dust
consumes everything, everypart of
you it touches is disolved into
it, I have the items they didnt
eat


Tosses the bag of stuff, now wet. on the console

                          DOCTOR 11
only metals, glass and plastics.
Why did you bring this stuff here?


                          DOCTOR 10
I was going to see if the Tardis
could tell me what touched it.


                          ROSE
completely pointless now, we got a
jar of the stuff


                          DOCTOR 11
not completely pointless, i want
to scan the stuff anyway. hand me
something metal and something
plastic


DOCTOR 10 pulls out a credit card, DOCTOR 11 takes it but
just looks at it.

                          DOCTOR 11
there are holes in this too, but i
dont think anyting was consumed,
it was like they punched though
rather than ate. now a metal
object


DOCTOR 11 takes a gold tooth and places it on the scanner.
paper prints this time, no image on the screen. AMY snatches
it and reads

                          AMY
nothing, not even a scratch. it
hasn't been touched


                          DOCTOR 11
      (smiling)
I thought so. The Dust 'fainted'
when Big Ben struck, and again
when i soniced it.


                          DOCTOR 10
      (excited)
metalic or electronic sounds must
effect it. it cant push through
the metal and if it touched it it
would set of a noise that would
paralize itself. i bet it is the
same with glass.


                          DOCTOR 11
      (practically
       jumping)
but with electronic noise, it
seems to fall into hypnosis. it
followed the screwdriver like a
snake to a flute


ROSE goes to the scanner and starts to work with it

                          DOCTOR 10
So we know what it is, and how to
hurt it, now all we need to know
is where it came from


                          RORY
does that matter?


                          DOCTOR 10
of course it does! knowing where
it came from will help me to find
out why!


                          ROSE
The Dust came from your universe,
i mean mine, i mean the one we
came from. It somehow got itslef
over here, days ago, according to
this


                          DOCTOR 10
How did you get here? I thought it
wasn't possible.


                          AMY
Really? I'm mean it wasnt a smooth
ride but it was quick, a massive
solar flair hit


                          DOCTOR 11
      (slaps self)
THAT'S IT! The solar flair!


runs to the opposite side of the console and fiddles

                          DOCTOR 11
I'm going to bring up the records
from when he were in orbit around
that sun.... AH! that solar flair
wasnt natural, well it was, but it
had been altered. the records show
it was going around the sun when
we entered its orbit, something
about it flung us here, i think it
flung the Dust, and the missing
planet, but the planet didnt make
it


sounds of fizzing and popping ensue

                          DOCTOR 11
drat! still not functional! it
didnt get any data on the make up
of the flair. Didn't i send you
out to get juice?


                          AMY
The money didnt work, clearly it
doesnt cross dimensions


                          DOCTOR 11
Oh. well the Tardis still needs
the juice, we need to get money


                          ROSE
we've got plenty of money, but the
main problem is the Dust, it's
eating people. if not to be
hostile then as prey. it needs to
be stopped, Doctor, you have to
help us


The jar starts to wobble, and falls of the console, AMY
dives for it, catching it just in time

                          DOCTOR 11
      (taking the Jar
       from AMY)
that was close!


                          AMY
WOW, look at that!


Everyone looks at the jar. CU on jar. The Dust is in a mini
twister. DOCTOR 11 shakes the jar, the dust falls to the
bottom

                          DOCTOR 10
What are you doing!?


                          DOCTOR 11
just a thought


CU on Jar. the Dust formed a pile, the top starts to swirl,
gathering in more dust and getting bigger this way

                          DOCTOR 11
Like sharks


                          ROSE
WHAT?


                          DOCTOR 11
The Dust didnt stay at the bottom,
it formed a twister again, when I
used the sonic it hung like a
cloud, and swayed in the wind. But
there is no wind in the jar, it
made it's own.


                          DOCTOR 10
Is this important?


                          DOCTOR 11
I have no idea


                          DOCTOR 10
But it might be!


                          DOCTOR 11
exactly. Oh and we need to put the
jar in a place it cant break


                          RORY
Maybe we should put it in the
pool, i bet it cant survive in
water


                          DOCTOR 11
      (astonished)
RORY! i want to store it not kill
it! This stuff is sentient, I'm
sure it is. Which means we can
talk to it, but if we kill the
Dust we have that might not be an
option


                          RORY
so we're keeping it hostage?


                          DOCTOR 11
NO! I'm keeping peacful options
open! but you do make a point it
works as a hostage too. not that I
like that, I dont like hostage
situations.


                          AMY
we cant talk to what we have?


                          DOCTOR 11
I dont think so. it is a part of
the whole being, too small a part
to think.


AMY RORY and ROSE look confused

                          DOCTOR 10
Like it doesnt have enough memory
space to form thoughts, not enough
Dust.


                          DOCTOR 11
precisely, not enough particles
here, but I bet the stuff chasing
me did


                          ROSE
Did you lose it?


                          DOCTOR 11
what?


                          ROSE
The Dust that chased you did you
lose it? did it stop following
you?


silence. DOCTOR 11 runs to the doors and looks out. Doctor
11 whips around, arms out palms on the door

                          RORY
      (distressed)
It's out there isnt it


                          DOCTOR 11
No, it's not. It's not out there


DOCTOR 10 joins DOCTOR 11 and looks out. Dramatic music
starts

                          AMY
You can't seriosly think we
believe that, that is the most
pathetic lie you-


                          DOCTOR 10
He's not lieing


                          ROSE
dont you start!


                          DOCTOR 10
He's not. It isn't out there,
we're in it


Shocked expressions on ROSE, RORY, and AMY. Dramatic music
increases in volume
Cut To the outside of the Tardis. The Tardis is in the
middle of a tornadoe, not being thrown about but high off
the ground. Zoom Out till the view is out of the Twister.
The Twister is tall, above the surrounding buildings, and
thin. Dramatic music at climax.

                                            CUT TO COMMERCIAL



EXT. LONDON - DAY

The Twister swirls. It does not go anywhere. Cut To the
base, the people near it either get sucked in or dust
shoots out and consmes them and rushes back into the whole.
people run screaming.

Cut to Pete in Torchwood Tower, Pete is in ROSE's office.
Alarms blare, the desk an wall screen are on. the wall
screen is split into four views, each on the Twister. Pete
slides a symbol on the desk, words appear "speakers
activated"

Cut to the streets. panic is rampant. Speakers come out of
street lights, lamp posts, fire hydrants and trash bins.
Pete's voice is heard

                          PETE
Attention we are facing an active
alien threat. Do not engage.
Suggested action: flee, do not
seek shelter, zeppelins will not
land, alien is mobile in the air
[repeat from suggested]


Cut back to office. Pete turns from the desk to face Rina,
an intern. [description: she is an attractive secretary,
imagine her how you will, I imagine her older than 30] Rina
holds a touch pad

                          RINA
      (looking up from
       her pad)
The alien has not moved from the
side street, but people near it
were lost


                          PETE
I'm going to call Rose, she might
know something (taps ear piece) I
need a squad to look for the
Tardis


                          RINA
what's a Tardis?


                          PETE
a vehical, looks like a blue box,
Rose will most likely be in it.
Damn! no connection!


                          RINA
      (stareing at wall
       screen)
Mr. Tyler, you said a blue box?


                          PETE
yeah


Rina points at the screens. Pete turns around. Rina goes up
to the desk and touches a few symbols. the top corner view
expans over the rest. flashes of something blue and
rectangular in the Twister. screen zooms in, it is clearly a
blue box

                          PETE
oh of course! brilliant. (To Rina)
boost my signal!


                          RINA
Yes Mr.Tyler


Cut to Inside the Tardis

                          RORY
We're in the Dust?


                          DOCTOR 11
well, in a twister made up of it


                          AMY
      (breathing hard)
What do we do!?


                          DOCTOR 11
I have no idea! we cant
dematerialize


                          ROSE
WHY NOT!


                          DOCTOR 10
Dematerializing while in motion is
risky with natural and reacuring
phenomenon, but when the motion is
being controlled by a senciant
force? well we might as well just
walk into the vortex right now!


A phone ring is heard. ROSE takes out a cell phone

                          ROSE
hello?


view will switch with dialogue unless specified

                          PETE
oh thank god! are you in one
peice?


                          ROSE
yes, we're all fine the Dust
hasn't entered the Tardis


                          PETE
is there anything Torchwood can
do?


                          ROSE
I dont know.
(to DOCTOR 10) anything Torchwood
can do?


                          DOCTOR 10
nothing right now


                          ROSE
no but we might think of
something, I'll call you


Rose puts her phone back in her pocket

                          DOCTOR 10
I have an idea!


EVERYONE (except DOCTOR 11) "what?"

                          DOCTOR 10
I cant beleive i didnt think of it
before! Do you have two sonics?


                          DOCTOR 11
no but i can get you one


                          DOCTOR 10
AMY, ROSE, come to the door


AMY and ROSE go up to the door. DOCTOR 11 gives DOCTOR 10
his sonic and runs to the console and starts typing on the
typewriter, and does other things

                          DOCTOR 10
each of you take a handle, and
open when i say so


                          AMY
      (alarmed)
What!?


                          DOCTOR 10
Trust me, this will work


a new sonic pops out. DOCTOR 11 throws it to DOCTOR 10.
DOCTOR 10 places the tips close together

                          DOCTOR 10
NOW!


AMY and ROSE pull the doors open. Wind howls and blows.
DOCTOR 10 activates the sonics at the same time. huge sound
waves are emitted.
View OUTSIDE- the sound waves hit the Twister.
screeches/screams of the Dust join the noise of wind and
sonic. (though really the screams of the Dust shouldn't be
heard)
Zoom Out. the Twister vibrates. View INT TARDIS- everyone's
hands on their ears
View EXT- the Twister "runs" (it flees in groups of Dust in
many directions from the Tardis)

                          DOCTOR 10
We're in free fall!

CUE EPIC CLIMAX MUSIC

everyone grabs hold of something as they fall, Rory snatches
the Jar, and start to lift into the air. DOCTOR 11
difficulty pilots the TARDIS, the materialization noise
starts, DOCTOR 10 closes the doors.                                                            

                                                                   FADE OUT