OUT - Blimp through the Badlands P.3

And here's the third part
I've never done comic pages as such before, and these are only 'sketches' too, but what with dialogue and fonts I am VERY new and I think it shows very clearly.
If there's anything that needs to be approved, please let me know. I've realised I think I can get away with making the font-size smaller... much smaller actually, but I'm always afraid of cramming too much text into too little space, and make the font too small.
Anyhoo, critique is more than appreciated.

P. 1

P. 2