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CJRFM and Related Characters © SCIFIJACKRABBIT // TEAM-HAPPI-BOMB // CJRFM
Art © 2012
TUMBLR//@ scifijackrabbit.tumblr.com/
FURAFFINITY//@ www.furaffinity.net/user/scifi…
YOUTUBE//@ www.youtube.com/user/SCIFIJACK…
SOUNDCLOUD//@ soundcloud.com/jai-q
Like CJRFM on facebook! www.facebook.com/pages/Concret…
Go read more of the comic @ team-happi-bomb.deviantart.com…
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LOVED MAKING THIS PAGE!
"meanwhile..whilst Frank gets abducted by Toni..."
this is what happens when his leaves his door open >w>
DUN DUN DUN
Entering new character. (or perhaps one I just havn't drawn for ages) ^w^
[[EDIT: gave it a little bit of a clean. probably not noticeable but it is too me =w=]]
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Comments, faves and crits are appreciated very much!
Art © 2012
TUMBLR//@ scifijackrabbit.tumblr.com/
FURAFFINITY//@ www.furaffinity.net/user/scifi…
YOUTUBE//@ www.youtube.com/user/SCIFIJACK…
SOUNDCLOUD//@ soundcloud.com/jai-q
Like CJRFM on facebook! www.facebook.com/pages/Concret…
Go read more of the comic @ team-happi-bomb.deviantart.com…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
LOVED MAKING THIS PAGE!
"meanwhile..whilst Frank gets abducted by Toni..."
this is what happens when his leaves his door open >w>
DUN DUN DUN
Entering new character. (or perhaps one I just havn't drawn for ages) ^w^
[[EDIT: gave it a little bit of a clean. probably not noticeable but it is too me =w=]]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Comments, faves and crits are appreciated very much!
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© 2012 - 2024 SmokyJai
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Oh, my first critique ever. Im not really sure how this goes but I'll try my best.
Im not going to lie, I dont know what this comic is about nor have I ever read it, so I wont judge it on story base. The vision is clear and I can fully understand what is going on. I cant say its too dark even for a dark room.
I like the emptiness of the room with just the ipad there ( who would leave such a precious piece of equipment lieing around? I dont know why but I like the way the frames are set up. I like how the last frame has the main character looking down, with the picture in the background.
This has been Pedro G Gumball McGee with my amateur critique