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finally done it, i haven't written for 2 years but i found a story that is my own. so please, don't be mean about it, if you don't like it, simply say "i don't like it" i don't want any "your writing sucks" anyways, this is the first chapter of what i hope to be many, i have no idea what these stories will hold or what they may provoke in people. anyways, if you like the beginning please, watch my channel here on da and feel free to make requests... unless your an ass then you can sit on it, lol, seriously though, leave a comment if you like the story, and yes i know its short

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pretty good ^^ i know its just an intro but i think it needs more "body" so that it flows better, the idea is good though and i like the journal entries theme, makes it feel like you are actually along for the ride or stumbling across the journal like its a discovery of some sort but yeah overall thumbs up :)