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Back in the hotel room, I plopped onto the bed. It felt good to feel warm again after being under the waterfall. Fluttershy came over and slowly crawled ontop of me, much to my surprise. She planted a few delicate kisses on my lips and before I knew it I had made my way on top and kissed her from her lips down to her chest. I stopped for a minute and looked over to her and smiled brightly. She smiled too and put her hoof on my face before pulling me up. Confused, I tilted my head.

"What's wrong?" I asked.

She smiled and sighed, averting her gaze. "I...I brought something here for you..and..and I want you to see me in it now."

I grew more confused now. See her in it? What was she talking about. "What do you mean?" I asked.

She giggled and hopped off the bed, and trotted over to her suitcase. She picked it up in her mouth and went to the bathroom. She put the suitcase on the floor and gave me as stern a look as she could; borderline stare territory. "Now stay out there, and don't peak!" she commanded.

Growing excited, I nodded and rubbed my hooves together greedily. "Okay okay, no peaking!" I said, wondering what it could be. It must have been lingerie or some sexy outfit. I knew that, I was just anticipating what it could be! Knowing Fluttershy; she'd never do something like this unless she truly felt comfortable with me. I was more happy about the thought of her being comfortable enough to show me a side of her she never showed anyone else, than to see her in that outfit.

Slowly I saw the bathroom door open as the room was illuminated by it's bright lights. My jaw dropped as I saw her standing there; words could hardly describe how truly beautiful and amazing she looked in that maid outfit for me. Her coy smile gave off her signature shyness that I knew and loved about her. She tried to stand on her two back legs but practically wobbled. I pretended not to notice as she slumped onto the wall, a deep red blush forming on her cheeks. She closed her eyes shyly and finally she spoke.

"Well...what do you think?" she asked finally. Her voice as soothing as velvet.

My jaw gaped open as I stared in awe at her and felt myself blushing uncontrollably as well. I sat up and leaned forward onto the bed. A giant smile on my face that I couldn't help but embrace. I slowly began to trot over to her and pulled one hoof around her neck, bringing her down to meet my lips in a deep, passionate kiss before I spoke.

"You look so beautiful, Fluttershy. Stunning, even." I whispered in her ear.

She smiled and whimpered happily, nuzzling into my neck. "I'm so glad you like it.."

I let out a loud laugh which seemed to startle her, before leading her over to the bed. I climbed ontop of her and stroked her mane with one of my hooves and leaning down for my lips to hover over hers. "I love it"

We smiled at eachother for a long time and just enjoyed the moment. A nice hotel room at beautiful Neighagra falls. And it really felt like we were the only two ponies in the world. "Fluttershy...I love you so much..this couldn't get more perfect."

She smiled shyly and averted her eyes before answering. "I love you too, Dashie..." she leaned forward now to kiss me on the cheek. I stood up and turned off the bathroom lights and walked back over to her in the now dimly lit room. I leaned in to kiss her lips and even in the dark I could still feel her smile against mine.

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After a few more days it was time to head back home unfortunately. We enjoyed the scenery and the fancy restaurants but we had to get back to Ponyville. As Pegasi, we had to get ready for the Winter Wrap up that would be happening soon. And we had to be ready for it to come. It would be up to us to clear the clouds and bring back the birds. I was just so happy I could get into the sky again. Being with Fluttershy has caused me to take life a bit slower now.

Not that I minded. As we arrived back in Ponyville the air was still nippy and cold and since it was night, it only made it worse. We hopped off the train before I flew up into the air, encouraging Fluttershy to accompany me. With some hesitation she flew up, trying to balance her suitcase with her flying. She squealed a bit before smiling weakly at me. I smiled back and flew close to her, flying her to the closest cloud for her to sit on. I figured it'd be easier to push her and our suitcases back to Fluttershy's without her having to hurt herself flying.

"Here we go." I said, patting the cloud with my hoof. She sat on it and laid down with our suitcases and grew quiet. I knew that there were times when she grew quiet before so I didn't think too much of it before.

It was 10 minutes and everything was still silent. I grew a little worried and finally broke it. "You alright, Fluttershy?"

She shrugged and turned to face me. "I feel just terrible that you're so held back by me all the time.." she admitted.

I smiled warmly at her. I plopped my frontside on the cloud and continued to fly and reached over to put a hoof to her cheek. She hesitated to let me do it, but gave in and frowned.

"You know that I don't mind at all, Fluttershy. I'd rather go slow with you than fast alone, ya know?"

Fluttershy gave a sad giggle. "Yeah..well. That's a silly reason." a small smile formed on her face which caused my smile to widen.

"There's the Fluttershy I know and love~" I cooed before we finally arrived at her house. She picked her suitcase up and leaned up to kiss me on the cheek.

"Thanks, Dashie.." she said.

I smiled and shook my head. "No problem, darling." I pecked her on the lips and flew up into the sky, the night air nipping at my skin. IT felt so good to fly like this but I made sure I didn't pick up speed until I knew she couldn't see me. She would always feel awful. Awful about knowing how fast I can go and she's stuck holding me back. As much as I've told her it isn't true, she still wont believe me.

I hope I can get her to see that. Maybe someday she'll see I enjoy slowing down for her. Maybe.
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CocoCandy2007's avatar

Me: Aw, that was so cute-clicks next and sees the art-dang tyler dang this gonna be good