literature

dreamscape

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Two lives

One soul,

One heart

One goal,

One day death will take its toll,


One hate

Two loves,

Bones break

Time undoes,

Say goodbye to everyone,


I hunt

You run,

Your hearts racing, so lets have fun,

Around the corner, down the street,

I smell your fear and here your feet,


I watch you struggle in your sleep,

I watch you toss and kick your feet,

Your breathings shallow, your hearts trying to beet

And you can't even scream,


I sit and laugh at your pain

Because I know I've struck again,

You lost your tong you can not say,

Who bottled your soul and, walked away...

 

In the morning you will not wake

Your bodies cold, your soul I take

Know one notices your body decay,

Your forever lost in your dreamscape.

 

 

 

i didnt know what to do with this poem i think i couldave gone meny routs but this is how i went plz leave feed back i reely apreecieate it and sujestions of what i can add or take away helps 2 does anyone else think its know where gory enough??
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