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The Power in my Paw

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heey ^^
to be honest I didn't want to do any picture in the weekend, because next week the school starts and I have two examins and so on... but I'm too lazy to learn for it, so here is the pic ;P

It's my Blackstar, the leader of InkClan in our RP-Group Paths - Between two Fronts. In the background you can see a little bit of the InkClan-Camp. There is a window, which is naild with some wodden boards. The Camp of the InkClan is in an old and abandoned warehouse.

I wanted to do a Ref Sheet for him and because I like how his pose came out I made this pic out of it ^^
I needed really a lof of time to get the right sketch for him, because he is a little bit difficult, but at the end I used a reference picture I really like and I always wanted to use, so yeah, I think this pose is really cool ;P ^^;

Here the Reference Picture I used: [link]


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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I must say I really do love your art, and am so happy that I stumbled across your page.

I really like this pic, and this character, his design is very interesting, if I ever have time I would love to draw him. The expression and emotion in general is amazing, that's something I've always had trouble with so I cant help but be impressed ^^

There are however a few issues I would like to point out so you can fix them, or just keep them in mind for next time. Or of course you could always just disregard my advice if you wish. The main thing that's bothering me is the inner elbow of the leg he has raised, it's too thick. Compare it to the leg he has resting on the ground and you'll realize it's much much thicker. It should connect farther down his chest. Another thing I notice right off the bat is his head is rather large, I would probably take the entire head and "mane" area and shrink it down just a bit, to make it more proportional with the rest of his body.

Annnnd the background... you knew I'd get to that right? you have a few problems here that have thrown off the whole pic for me at least. The thickness of the lines around the window is my main issue with it. All of your line art for your cat, and the ground he's sitting on is very thin, then suddenly the window has very, very thick lines. It just doesn't look right, it looks almost like you pulled it from another picture. A couple other things you could do to fix the window are the make sure the border is an even thickness all the way around, ass joints to the corners (Just a line from the corner of the window to the inner corner of the border, this makes it seem to me a sort of wooden frame, it gives it depth and perspective)

I would probably also look up broken glass, when it breaks like this more often than not there will also be a hair line crack going through a large portion of the window (Should look something like very jagged lightning) Another little detail I would like to see, but looks fine with or without, would be shafts of light coming in through the broken sections of the window, you have something like this already, but they're very blurry, it would be nice if you made it more obvious that they were coming through the cracks in a specific direction than just coming in and blurring out everywhere.

I know I pointed out quite a few flaws but they were all small and are just little things I feel could really add to the pic, all together it really is amazing and I adore your style. It reminds me a lot of my aunts old style ~WillowWhiskers if you want to see ^^ I hope this helps you some~