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MAU The Unseen

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This is a copy of my novella that I am submitting for my Honours Degree in Creative Writing.

It's based upon the Japanese Light Novella, using similar themes and cliches.

It's due next week, so any feedback is welcome (yes, there will be grammatical errors).

I ultimately want to get a version of this published, complete with illustrations down in a manga style.
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Nicely done, I enjoyed it! I'm easy-going when it comes to things like narrative, plot and character development, so nothing troubled me there. I'd be happy to get out my grammar stick and give it/you a good once-over. A few sentences here and there would read more smoothly if they were shortened or tweaked, particularly in the prologue.