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Literature Text
Perhaps, it was the lights
Maybe, it was the r u m b l e
. . . .
J e r k i n g
T h ɹ ɐ s h i u g
Spew ~ ing ~
Leaving
Him
STRANGE
Maybe, it was the r u m b l e
. . . .
J e r k i n g
T h ɹ ɐ s h i u g
Spew ~ ing ~
Leaving
Him
STRANGE
This is my submission for the introductory poem of
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NOTES
1. See end of chapter 1
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NOTES
- I took the seizure from the Prologue, and made it sound... well... obscene1. I think this really grabs the attention.
- I had lots of fun with the formatting: getting each word to represent its real-life counterpart. Hence the lights hanging, rumble rumbling, the 'k' jerking , and so on and so forth.
- There are also a few other subtleties I must point out:
- There's an exclamation point (outlined from jerking to strange) to suggest the danger.
- The shrinking text (from jerking to Him) is to show the redhead weakening.
- Leaving Him is a double entendre for the vomit leaving him (The redhead) and also leaving him (Paul) strangely changed.
1. See end of chapter 1
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