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The Red - Final Round Results
Winner: ~PailKnight (https://www.deviantart.com/pailknight)
Charil (https://www.deviantart.com/charil) vs. PailKnight (https://www.deviantart.com/pailknight)
TheLivingImpaired (https://www.deviantart.com/thelivingimpaired)
PailKnight
A nice and satisfying finale to your story. It had a nice logical result to the mystery, all the clues added up well and I was pleasantly surprised at who the murderer was. Dean has been a consistently likeable character and a good moral paragon against the less than ethical acts of the other characters. However, Linus being put out of the picture early makes him more a tool of exposition and there was no conflict or communication between the two characters. With such a good build up in the last round, having the two of them hardly interact felt like
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The Red: Final Round Match-Ups
Deadline: March 3rd 9pm EST
Congratulations to PokeLucario (https://www.deviantart.com/pokelucario), MightyDork (https://www.deviantart.com/mightydork) & katuriannapels (https://www.deviantart.com/katuriannapels) for third place! Don't forgot your prizes~! It's to your discretion to reach out to the contributors!
The final round is over! 'Tis unfortunate to have a one-sided victory but nonetheless. The judges have been notified and the final announcement will made in the following week. A big round of applause!
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The Red - Round 3 Results
Winner: ~Charil (https://www.deviantart.com/charil)
PokeLucario (https://www.deviantart.com/pokelucario) vs. Charil (https://www.deviantart.com/charil)
TheLivingImpaired (https://www.deviantart.com/thelivingimpaired)
Vote: Charil
Pokelucario
Things are clearly coming to a head with your story, your pacing has quickened, all the characters are mixing together, and emotions are high. These are all excellent to see in your storytelling, and I definitely felt the distress of your characters being separated like that. However, I still felt disconnected from the story for a couple of reasons. Mainly your villain of choice. You’ve spent a long time establishing Kenneth and Bruce as developed characters and I was rooting for them all the way through, but it feels like Kenneth&rsqu
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The Red: Round 3 Match-Ups
Deadline: January 5th 11:59pm EST
(Plus a 9 hour Grace Period)
Round 3 Results
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