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Man! This FAILS. I'm going to request a critiques! Don't just say, good job! I want both positives and negatives.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
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Ah yes this is a very well ol you've drawn yourself and there are very few mistakes but here are some of the few although i can barely draw an owl myself these are the mistakes I have noted:alright the tail feathers are a bit too shown and are a tidibt too small but done very well now the legs/talons are a bit too straight try making them sorta' diagnal and last the wings are great you just need another layer of feathers and make them less as straight curve them down a bit and now the head its just a bit too straigh up maybe if you could aim it to the front more that would be great other than that your owl is amazingly done ! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt=":dummy:" title="I am a dummy!"/> (<--- don't know if that turned out as i needed it too but what ever ^^)