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Raz and the Everything p4

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Well this page is definitely action packed and a little bit slightly violent. Did anyone see this coming? I did because, well, I've got the story planned out, but I'm just wondering if it seems to be going in a completely different direction than you thought?

Anyway, I can't help but feel that maybe I've used the wrong words for the sound effects, and maybe I've put them in the wrong places. I generally don't place so many sound effects into a comic, but this page has a lot going on in it, so well, I had to.

Comment and tell me what you thought about this page, I'd love to hear your opinons, whether they're good or bad.
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Hmm.... Well, honestly, you got me here. :nod: I really wasn't expecting violence in this comic. It looked somehow peaceful and calm.

Erasing attack... Maybe the alien race that invented this one is a race of artists? :XD: Artists erasing their mistakes. This would explain why they feel so important, important enough to say: "We are everything" and so on.

Fruit Juice Machine is even more mysterious than it seemed from the first sight! :la: This really grabs attention.