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"Truth," he said, "truth is pure multiplicity,"
and I suppose he was thinking of sidewalks—
I've been chasing concrete cracks round the city,
planting face, hoping for the growth of beanstalks
to clear out my heart-cracks of your name.
My cheek against the sun-warmed slabs of concrete
touches your cheek, sets my whole body aflame
with you—here, I see where earth and heaven meet.
{Ø{Ø,Ø}…}
My mathematician, if only you could sing
to me about the universe, my Cantor,
could tell me of the pavement to which I cling;
we are a set in stones, small and granular.
Though truth cannot be found in simplicity,
still, like sidewalk cracks, truth's in infinity.
"Truth," he said, "truth is pure multiplicity,"
and I suppose he was thinking of sidewalks—
I've been chasing concrete cracks round the city,
planting face, hoping for the growth of beanstalks
to clear out my heart-cracks of your name.
My cheek against the sun-warmed slabs of concrete
touches your cheek, sets my whole body aflame
with you—here, I see where earth and heaven meet.
{Ø{Ø,Ø}…}
My mathematician, if only you could sing
to me about the universe, my Cantor,
could tell me of the pavement to which I cling;
we are a set in stones, small and granular.
Though truth cannot be found in simplicity,
still, like sidewalk cracks, truth's in infinity.
This is a canzone for day 2 of DFC '12. [link] 11 syllables per line, rhyme scheme abab cdcd efef aa
Those two mathematical sets TOTALLY DON'T COUNT TOWARD THE NUMBER OF STANZAS just sayin'. I wanted to space the lines out to reduce the temptation to make this too singsong-y and keep the rhymes spaced out a bit.
Also written for my 100 poem project topic "qualia"
Used the idea of set theory. See Georg Cantor (sneaky use of his last name, no?) if you'd like more info. I don't really feel like trying to explain math at the present...
Hope you enjoy! I'm not entirely happy with this, but there you are, I suppose.
Also just realized I wasted the "chasing pavement" prompt for yesterday. Bummer.
Those two mathematical sets TOTALLY DON'T COUNT TOWARD THE NUMBER OF STANZAS just sayin'. I wanted to space the lines out to reduce the temptation to make this too singsong-y and keep the rhymes spaced out a bit.
Also written for my 100 poem project topic "qualia"
Used the idea of set theory. See Georg Cantor (sneaky use of his last name, no?) if you'd like more info. I don't really feel like trying to explain math at the present...
Hope you enjoy! I'm not entirely happy with this, but there you are, I suppose.
Also just realized I wasted the "chasing pavement" prompt for yesterday. Bummer.
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I... kind of adore this.
I'm impressed. Like... really impressed.
Those RHYMES.
I'm impressed. Like... really impressed.
Those RHYMES.