OK, so Im having a friend revise some of my work. So, if You've read the last chapter before Christmas (2012) You dont need to read this one, ok? I just chopped the last chapter in half.

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So, to my editor; I did not make any vhanges to either chapter other than chopping it in half. SO, no need to read through it again. Im working on fixing the text in a document at home.