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The Cat Who Hated Water - Haiku With Illustration

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I spent so long on this and I still love it so much!

Link to the haiku under "Literature" fav.me/d5ookkn

(An ancient pond.
A cat jumps in.
The sound of cat)

(Furuike ya
Neko wa tobikomu
Neko no oto)

ふ るいけや
猫 は 飛 び込む
猫ノオト

Syllables: (ok for less formal, "western" haiku)
Line 1: 5
Line 2: 7
Line 3: 5

Mora / Moras: (necessary for pure, traditional haiku)
Line 1: 5
Line 2: 7
Line 3: 5

Haiku: by SrTw 2008. Fun version about a cat - assumption that cats hate water!!!


(Inspired by Haiku "Furuike ya..." by Matsuo Bashou)
[A rough translation of the original:
"An ancient/old pond
(A) frog jumps in.
The sound of water"]
Image size
3152x3120px 7.63 MB
Make
Panasonic
Model
DMC-TZ20
Shutter Speed
10/600 second
Aperture
F/3.3
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jan 27, 2013, 2:06:08 PM
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GUDRUN355's avatar
I really like this - the Haiku and your drawing! :)