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Let me write you a poem

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The awesome cover image was done by ~NadyaBird . A tanka is an extended haiku 5-7-5 7-7. Also the two quotation marked statements beneath the lyric part, are two famous lyrics/sonnets. Sonnet 18 by William Shakespeare and Italian Sonnet by John Deford. Alright so i am relative pleased with this one but i hated one major fact of it: How mydescription almost entirely centered around physical beauty and repeatedly used the same adjectives; however this is my problem which i chose to ignore, so i hope everyone enjoys :D. Also used in #Live-Love-Write 's "Best of You" Contest here: [link]
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angrboda555's avatar
aww that's sweet!