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First Place -- Teeter, by SeaPlume



This poem flows like the sea. :heart:

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Second Place -- rock bottom, ocean floor, by Sammur-amat


rock bottom, ocean floorhalf-past a different kind of broken
on sadness, she wrote:
           
           blind fool in the umbra    
           bury yourself in me
           on the other side of lonely
           and by god, i love you
                (maybe i will be a landfill)
           
everyone i meet looks for a place to stay;
out of the woods, on wet roads
under wind, under rain
  -i'm so far away
no wonder it took him 1455 pages
waiting for her to come this way
tramps like us-
               in lieu of emptiness
               in absence of a poem
               wander, wander
                    (pour a little salt, we were never here)
your heart was a broken sailor
fishing for hearts with lace and not netting;
into the deep end of our story
i saw god leaving the shore


Beautiful words from a lovely deviant--soft and melancholy, 
with an ending that'll stick with you.

More from Sammur-amat...

a seafarer's lamentand now,
still,
  does the lightning-stricken current in your very pulse rage and roar
  every time you touch her as it did whenever you held me- the vastest of seas
  and your surely wide-eyed, waiting, warrioress waterline?
and,
  if i could be every ocean, did you know
  i would be so just for you- to stretch across
  all possible crevices to calm your molten core and quivering plates
what if,
  i could take her river form? become the vivid, sweet-water you longed for,
  washing-away the infinite that i could be just to claim myself as your source
  - even if i were to become a tool for all those towns and all their inhabitants  
if only,
  your always aubade eyes did not deliver to me such agony by scalding
  my surface yet leaving my deepest parts crisp-cold, maybe i would have
  been able to understand why some scars are made out of possessiveness
tell me,
  would i then have stood a chance to barrel you into these waves of mine?
  could
  some idioms- part i of iilet sleeping dogs lie
said my best friend
while every cell
in my body
shuddered in stupor
wanting nothing more than
to forgive him again
after having gone
a good quarter-year
without him already
when it rains it pours
said my little sister
as i held her hand
bawling in stupor
after watching him
hold her hand
as she gets out
of his car to
lead her unto
his apartment door
between a rock and a hard place
i will say to myself
after realizing that
i had gotten into
this new relationship
simply out of spite
& that it would be
evil of me
to lead him on when
i can't ever belong
  (c)loves and (c)loversi am no artist's muse,
    i am no ship's harbor
         i am no hero's weaker heel,
              i am no good earth's flower
i have never been your lover
nor have i ever kissed you,
- not even once
    though i dream of you (c)love-scented,
    with lips shaped like a lucky (c)lover's-
    kissing you and to be kissed by you
    over and
    over
i can never profess,
not even confess
  note:
    even to myself
i stay standing, (b)raving the cold nights,
pretty much batty and bootless
         yet again,
       the absence of you weighs metric tons on my
     ringing ear,
   shivering nape, and
 repressed shoulder
you dam(n) me with
your body;
you are my river's boulder,
untapped territory,
and undefined border


Third Place -- Winter's Words by BlakeCurran



A lot of atmosphere wrapped up in
a neat little package.

More from BlakeCurran...

Sepia Stretch by BlakeCurran  Wisdom ExtractedThey extricated my three-quarters wisdom
When I was not yet an adult, not yet
A legal all-grown-up. The cannula
And the ceiling slid away and were replaced:
Pain and manufactured atmosphere and a
Numbing over all of it. Take the analgesics.
They left behind their trail of surgical twine
And instructions and a woozy contemplation.
Rinse with warm saltwater. Use icepacks.
So I did.
They never forgot the price, the dollar-signs
Flashing, flashing, flashing in an epileptic fit.
Finish the course of antibiotics. Finish:
It was always about completion, I thought,
That satisfaction, that absence of absence,
And a few nights after I watched that film
With Keira Knightley and the new Spiderman,
And best of all Daisy from Luhrmann's Gatsby.
My wisdom was extracted, in some bizarre
And mandatory initiation ritual. Bed rest
Is recommended.
I wanted to sleep, wanted
So badly to do something, but a side-effect
Was nausea and a sick worry pooled like pus
In the gap
  Fiji Glinting by BlakeCurran

Honorable Mentions!



Splits lips upon starsMorning
                  splits
open, like orange-flesh
cradled
in a palm.
I tuck consonants between my
          lips/
draw moon-craters in my eyes; I make wishes
                          upon stars
that are too far away to realise and hope
that somehow things will
change. Yet
the sun is still a mere hole
                in the
                                    sky.
con espressionecon espressione.
I.
You were the only one who could play my ribcage like a pianist in concert. Your fingers found their home in the spaces between my ribs [fifth, sixth, seventh], and nestled against the soft curve of my violin-waist.
IV.
We should take it adagio, you said as we got lost in a tangle of freckled limbs that had seen too much August sunlight. OK, I breathed back, but of course we ignored that once the stars exploded above our heads.
V.
Two quavers of a crotchet (it was never two halves of a whole), we descended into bass clef and danced the line that was the F below middle C. Your fingers were mezzo piano on my skin as you led me towards that imperfect cadence.
We were more beautiful together than apart.
  SummertimeSummertime, and white
          picket fences lean softly
against dew-soaked grass.


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