Luna Dragons

Hey! This is cute! Good work with the expression. I especially like that you've put work into the shadows of the talons and the little puff of smoke is adorable. Really gorgeous little touches.

I thiink you've put a lot of thought into the names here - I like that you've clearly considered what you're drawing and that's paid off in the composition as well. I think your palette works well (blue/orange and purple/yellow is always a good choice!).

In terms of things that I thought could improve - for some reason the crescent moons on the tail don't sit right in the image for me. I think it's the fact the shadows are so well done on the main part of the tails: I get the impression that the crescents are sitting underneath the tails as opposed to being part of them.

I also feel that you've put so much effort into this piece that it's a shame not to display it to its full potential! By scanning this in and playing with the levels etc., you could make this image pop a lot more on screen (it also might make the lines on the underbelly in the mother clearer, because for a quick second I thought that that part of the image had been missed in the colouring before realising it was intentional - I think the lines should be as clear and elegant on the belly as they are on the neck <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>)

One final point - love how you used the pen stroke visibility to your advantage on the mother dragon. Really good job adding volume and form to the dragon through texture!