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60 For 60: The Adventure of the Priory School

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SITTING ROOM. NIGHT. SEMI-DARKNESS.

Holmes works at an experiment. Occasional explosions.
Watson enters.

Holmes: Could you not sleep?

Watson: (pointedly) No.

Crosses to fireside chair. Trips on bearskin hearthrug.

Watson: Damn!

Noises without. Ruffians enter.

Leader: Die, Mr Holmes!

Watson: (wraps himself in bearskin) Raaaawr!

Ruffians yell. Exit, pursued by a bear.

Big pause.

Holmes: Why the big paws..?

Curtain
We have had some dramatic entrances and exits upon our small stage at Baker Street…
…our bearskin hearthrug.

All words are included in the 60 word count. (I’ve gone off at a tangent for this one.)

This story has the subtitle: Drama.

Part of my attempt to write a 60 word story for each of Conan Doyle's 60 Sherlock Holmes novels and short stories. Inspired by sherlock60's Sherlock Holmes: 60 for 60 challenge on LiveJournal, and also by ~demonempress (~Hisietari) who is taking part in the challenge ^^
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Oh my gosh it took me forever to figure out the paws. :dummy:

You always make the best play on words! It's a real challenge for me to figure them out, sometimes (maybe something to do with the british humor - I'm afraid I'm not quite used to it, although I find it great - better than a pie in the face. Nothing beats witty.)