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Original here>>>
I can safely say it looks MUCH better XD
Background is quite meh, but oh well :3

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EDIT: Added scales :3
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

i'm not an expert in these critiques but i will try my best;

first of all the scenario in this artwork is clear, not only because of the text but because of his rather aggressive look and blood stains. the perspective is rather nice on this one, in fact i don't think there is any improvement needed.

the drawing itself is very original. it's not that easy to find anthro dragons/reptiles that look cool and have enough detail. hair is not part of a reptile wich makes it hard to use while still making it look realistic. though here it's not even a bit weird. it suits him perfectly and even shows his personality.

a creative piece of armor by the way. the contrast of yellow ad black is really nice.

and one more thing and that's the colors; the colors are very well chosen and the shading is used almost everywhere. for example his hair has multiple shades of yellow. the body to has different shades on the right places, the anatomy is very realistic.

only 2 small bad points:
- no actual visible cutting wounds (only blood stains)
- no background