Ok so somehow I ended up with two critiques on the same picture so to make it fair I have critiqued a second piece of art. I have left feedback for ~ChantalIZ

“The most interesting thing about this piece is the fact that it’s painted onto a lightbulb, a very creative idea that works well with the subject matter. You can definitely see the inspiration that has been drawn from Banksy’s work and applied a unique twist to it to make it an original idea.

To go into improvement, I would say perhaps some experimentation with various colours (however I think the monochrome effect works very well here), or to extend the painting around the entire light bulb as from what I can see it’s only on one side? If you were to experiment with anything like this again you could consider leaving little parts unpainted so that the light could shine through and make patterns.

Overall it’s a really creative way of working, definitely a unique idea and a one of a kind piece of art. Very nicely done.”