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Ringo Hanabi to Soda no Umi

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finally finished!!

Based of Mafumafu’s Ringo Hanabi to Soda no Umi
Original PV here: www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm24205…

Thank you to all those who came to the streams I did while drawing this!
Also thank you to :iconmatomiki::iconsarahwidiyanti::iconheichoou::iconflashinx::icontashaj4de::iconaeirue-chan::icontsukimiin::iconkiyou-rin::iconkuroshirokey:
who gave me critique on the version before! I highly appreciate it!

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

What I like most about this drawing is that there's so many things to work with and there's a lot of potential to develop this even further to become an even more amazing drawing.

The things that gets my attention first is the background. It is so bright and colourful and the clouds are seriously so pretty to look at.

But since the background is so eye-catching, the subject at hand (Mafumafu-kun and Mafuteru) is not noticed immediately and is probably the last thing for anyone to notice.
Unless you intended it to be in that way.
Because, the other paraphernalia like the cute cats and the amazing fox mask which are placed right in the center, will grab everyone's attention next after the fireworks.

I think that overall, the colouring here was really well done. You were able to represent texture well with minimal colours so really, well done Curu!!! Looking forward to more awesome art from you and to hopefully see a meme improvement of this!!! O v O