:G: Ryder

I really like this submission. There's a good amount of detail present, the clothing looks pretty good, and the linage seems proficient.

I'd say the only thing that still needs work is the relative sizing. Most of the time I use programs like flash to make sure things remain the exact same size or linear to each other, but I realize that traditionally that's much much harder to do.

Anyway, keep practicing; you'll get better over time just by repetition.

Good luck!