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so this is part of an illustration project im working on and my teacher told me to get rid of it bc it was "too beefy" and because "theres muscles in there that dont even exist" and its too sad to erase it so im saving it here bc tbh its the only good thing to come out of this godforsaken piece of shit please help me
normally i would put shit like this in scraps but obviously its too important so.