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Free Souls- chapter 15
Chapter fifteen: Spy
In a blink of the eye, the mask was gone. But Lilith was sure she saw it, as well as the red eyes behind it. she whispered, her heart beating like mad in her chest.
asked her Brughn who was sitting near Partas outside the tent. As they suspected, the pirate fell asleep during his turn.
Lilith whispered, not managing to formulate a proper answer; Brughn nodded. he continued, making the half-elf worry even more.
the girl asked, looking around in the darkness until she heard the others in the tent, starting to wake up: after turning and looking at Molfreid, she glanced at Keeo.
As the boy returned the stare, Lilith knew.
he asked.
Lilith stepped back near the tent, furious, examining his expression. she looked around in the tent, and saw Keeo’s bag: huge and suspicious. she ordered, pointing at it.
The boy hesitated, but the girl yelled again:
At that point the mercenary, worried at the weird, violent reactions of the half-drow,
Free Souls- chapter 14
Chapter fourteen: The blue and the mask
In their third day on the shore, a strong wind started howling and breathing from sea to land, shaking and blowing sand in swirls. They hadn’t eaten much in the previous days, but as it was better than nothing, they were starting to regain some strengths; nonetheless, that sandstorm was too fierce for the group.
They stood close to each other and walked for a few hours, then stopped behind a dune of sand to catch up their breath and make sure they were going in the right direction. The air was so filled with sand it was almost impossible to see the city, so they all agreed on waiting for the storm to be finished.
At sunset the wind stopped, and it started raining. They saw they were starting to change direction and head for North instead of West, so they just decided to spend the night there and wait, once again, for the rain to stop.
All soaked and cold, Partas started whining and envying Brughn’s pelts, warm in
Free Souls- chapter 13
Chapter thirteen: Reaching the shore
The man was quite young, probably in the middle of his twenties, his hair and eyes pitch black. He crawled towards them holding several wooden planks under his chest, waving his arms showing no experience and talent in swimming. His voice sounded pathetic and annoying to her ears, as he whined:
Lilith murmured, and right before she and Molfreid could take him up, she glanced at the companion. Understanding her intentions, the mercenary left his grab on the other man making him scream. The half elf reached out his shirt, and pulled it hard, fiercely. <I will keep you here, without being saved, until you’ve answered us> she told him, her tone firm and cold.
he blabbered, staring at her in fear. <I can’t swim, please, don’t let me go!>
she insisted, shaking him. Partas grabbed her arm with all his strengths, but she wasn’t afraid of falling in the sea, and didn’t hesitate in keeping her calm exp
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